Brilliant as always, Can I vote to make it Buffy\Foxx\Faith? Cause as much as B may be rebuilding her relationship with Willow. I doubt the trust level with ANY Scoob is quite the same as it was.

At the same time her bond with both Foxx and Faith is palpable.

this is perhaps one of my favorite stories.

it flows well and reads good so far.

This whole story line is a really neat idea. I can't wait to read more :)

Shucks, why didn't Buffy run into somebody like that when she was flipping burgers at DMP? Even if her reward had been only $100K, that'd still be better than the minimum wage grease factory.

Yeah, you already know I like it, but I'm reviewing anyway. Like it! Carry on. :) Oh, and thank you for everything!

Interesting the contacts made here might have manpower if things go total fubar while the ladies prep for what's coming a fall back point if things don't go well
Equally interesting is how quickly foxx is intergrated into buffy's mental space.

another excellent chapter.

I got a kick out of the end.

An interesting reunion to be sure, although if buffy was attempting to stay under the radar with the cops even with as little damage she did she'd probably going to get noticed.

the kick to the chest was perfect.

hmm...gov. agents kid? Anyways, great update.

I like it and hope more comes soon.

Very interesting so far, I like the background you've established and the bits to come you've hinted at.

Please , please, please. No 'adopting' the little kid, cuz' he has no place to go.
Maybe I wrong, but that's what popped into my head I read this.
I can't stand OC children in stories. They always feel so artificial to me.
And enough is enough. Buffy and Foxx net to get it on.
Neither of these women strike me as the beat around the bush kind of people anymore.

Just noticed one thing.
Chapter 2 had Foxx buying a 2005 Camaro. Except there is no 2005 Camaro.
Production ended in 2002 and started again in 2009 with the new design.
Did you mean she bought an old(retro) say 1969 that had been totaly torn down and rebuilt as new?
Now this latest chapter has her car as a Dodge Viper.
You need to fix that.

I look up all the vehicles (and most of the weapons) that I choose for my characters. Have to know if I'll like them or not.

Here's the 2005 Retro Camaro

http://www.fastcoolcars.com/2005retro_camaro.htm

But thanks for the Viper notice.

I couldnt decide what to say.

so, I'll say, in short, outstanding!

Kick-Ass chapter.