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Hate and Love: A story of a Father and a Son.

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Review of chapter "Chapter 3/Epilogue" from Angelfirenze
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That was nice to read, regarding the happy ending. You still need a beta rather badly, though, for spelling and characterization and whatnot, but again - it was a pretty decent story.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3/Epilogue" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Nice
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Angelfirenze
Review:
This is captivating despite said grammatical and medical (Connor...well, you could put it down to him being supernatural in nature, but based on the rules you're currently playing by, Connor should have died well before Angel got him back to the Hyperion's lobby) errors. I'm dashing over to the sequel to see what happens next.

My mistake, I had it mixed up with a different story. So in that case, please update soon!
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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