Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Deaths Gift" from WildMartin
I like the story so far, but it doesn't make any sense why both of them had to jump? That just seems like wasting a life. Wouldn't Buffy have wanted Bella to take care of Dawn?
Comments from author:
Dawn was made from both Buffy and Bella. Bella is Buffy cousin on her mothers side, she does not have Summers Blood as Summers is not Joyce's maiden name. Bella is a Swan. Dawns Blood is both Summers and Swan blood, hence the portal would not have closed if only Buffy jumped because the portal needed Summers and Swan blood to close. I hope that cleared that up for you.
Review By [WildMartin
] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: How it Begins..." from DarkFaerieYumi
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi
] • Date [8 Jan 11] • Not Rated