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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Vickzie
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Loving Buffy with Pam as her Maker! Hope she meets Eric soon.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Vickzie
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Interesting story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Past Donor)lucidity
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Loving this story!
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CassiopeiaHastur
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just read it again, because I really enjoy it so much..

It would be very happy, if you would update this story
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from carrytoomuch
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OK. You really need to update this, also "No Longer Required".
Nice to see Pam as one of the mains in this one, she does not get enough time in the books.
Review By [carrytoomuch] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)thetwitmachine
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why not moar? WE NEED MOAR!
Review By [(Recent Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from linny
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Please update... please! I love this story. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [linny] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from pureevil
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interesting story. wonder if buffy will end up with pam or eric. update soon please!
Review By [pureevil] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Sahugani
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The story is shaping up to be pretty good so far.

I'm still find myself wondering why she's handling it this well though. Being turned was one of her greatest fears.
i'm also wondering how long she's gonna be able to keep up the ignorant act. I think pretty soon Pam is going to have to see through her act.

Oh and are you using the books or the TV series for your continuity? I might have over looked it but I don't remember Pam being described. I know Pam was 18-19 when she was turned according to the books (but is described as dressing very momish) the TV show fudged that by about a decade. just trying to get a picture set in my head not criticize. I really like both versions of Pam.
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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You have some editing problems. Ex: Being as gentle as she could, Buffy bit in and let his blood flow into her of its own accord. Unlike last time, she didn't suck on him like a blood bag, but let his heart to the work for her.

"his heart DO the work for her"

Other than that, SUPERB job. You write an excellent Pam and a very believable Buffy who just got turned into a vampire. I love how powerful Buff is as a vamp and that Pam is clearly worried. I can't wait for Buffy to meet Eric yet all the chapter detours (gas stations, bars, etc) are wonderful additions to the story and make waiting for pretty Eric much easier.

Thanks for sharing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from anyanka
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Having a lot of fun reading this! Thanks for Vampire Buffy fic! Made my night!
Review By [anyanka] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Hecatonchires
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Really enjoying how this is tracking - Buffy discovering, Pam mothering.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from CassiopeiaHastur
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Every Chapter is like a birthday wish come true :)

Thanks to you I seem to have more than one Birthdays ... ;)
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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Interesting - I'm wondering what's happening back in Sunnydale, and how a sudden flood of Slayers will affect the vampire community (if that happens without Buffy there). Looking forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from clockworkorange
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Pam and Sleazy Vamp? Oh Pam, what in the world were you thinking?

Yay for Buffy learning how to glamour.

Great chapter.
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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