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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
I was vert skeptical when I saw this was a Human AU...I couldn't see how it could be done well.

But I really should know better than to second guess you.

The way you described each bro's personality in accordance to the order of their birth was WONDERFUL. I love it. I had a feeling going into it that you would be doing the opposite of the show, that Lucy would be on the good side, but I *really* liked the way you did it. Ah, and how you described the brothers. Michael killing Raph in the name of the job and the mention of all the other characters like CHuck and Anna.

Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelBlack
Beautifully written. Loved it.
Quite honestly, I recommend that you write more of it and then submit it to a publishing agency.
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ForeverWaiting
Whoa, that was differently good *blinks* Is there going to be any follow ups?
Review By [ForeverWaiting] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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