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Review of chapter "Superhero" from bradsan
Review:
I really hope that you'll update this good story. It would be a pity if you don't. I also hope it will become a Oliver/Buffy paring there are to few of them.

one thing though. To use strategic you need logic otherwise you can't plan or think on your feet while fighting.

Riley I never liked him because he was to smooth and to self centred. He couldn't bare that Buffy was stronger and has other people to think of. Never get that from him when you are in the army you know you have to put other things before your personal life. One thing he was correct about she never loved him the way you have to love your boyfriend. She cared but that was all.

Well I really hope you'll update this story ASAP. Such a good storyline and easy to read. So go for it.

edit: I just found out it's your first story. Well you can be proud of yourself it really good.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Superhero" from alcm
Review:
Interesting set-up... I look forward to more.
Review By [alcm] • Date [25 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Superhero" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
hooked! very good read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Superhero" from Blackett
Review:
interesting idea. hope that there will be more of this story
Comments from author:
Thanks, there will most definitely :)
Review By [Blackett] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Superhero" from Dmitri
Review:
Nice update! Glad to see Buffy make a new friend! Hopefully, the rest of the Scoobies will be equally accepting...
Comments from author:
Xander in any case eh!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Superhero" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Mmm, Buffy/Oliver. Don't suppose I can hold out hope for that 'ship, can I? By the way, this is set in season 5 right? Then why did Xander think Riley would be Buffy's 3rd vamp relationship? Is he counting Dracula? 'Cause holding Buffy accountable for Spike's obsession isn't really fair.
Comments from author:
Buffy/Oliver, I think is a great pairing, we shall see where, if anywhere, if leads. It's set loosely around Season 5, poetic license, read on to find out why :)
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voices" from RevDorothyL
Review:
You're really ending the story here? It feels like you're just getting started. Why did you decide to abandon it there?

[You had the story marked as COMPLETE after chapter 2 -- I see you've since corrected that and added two more chapters.]
Comments from author:
That's just the first chapter - am I publishing it wrong? It's my first one...
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Old Friend" from Dmitri
Review:
Hmm, that's one good cliffhanger to end your story on! Please try to update soon, your story's really good!
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I will do my very best.
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Old Friend" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Oh goody, a legitimate reason to kill Riley!

EDIT: You have the story marked 'completed'. You might want to go to the Story Details page and change that.
Comments from author:
Thanks, have done so now.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voices" from AwesomeGeek
Review:
I really liked it. Is there going to be anymore?
Comments from author:
Thanks - I've got the first three chapters up now and I have written four - it should be quite a long piece in the end :)
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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