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Review of chapter "The Whole SheBang" from leonamasha
Review:
Wow. This was an amazing read. Know it's been a few since an update. Just happy you posted this much! Thanks.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Whole SheBang" from FemXanderForever
Review:
Definitely how I would picture the action to pan out in a Jonin ANBU as Deidara was before he was AWOL would be against a Vamp or something. Even if a Vamp is ten times better, physically, than a normal human, they don't know how to utilise it properly, whereas Deidara would have trained with it enough to know how to use it, and he had been in the Akatsuki which is full of S-rank shinobi, and you don't become an S-rank Missing-nin by just blowing stuff up in a spectacular display. You become it by being a better shinobi all-round.

There was no way that a Genin or Chunin (which is what I'd rate Angel at, since he IS a Master Vampire, and therefore more in tune with what he can do) can compare to an S-rank Missing-nin unless they have both a lot of members and a team/type advantage.

Keep up the good work,
FemXanderForever.
Review By [FemXanderForever] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Whole SheBang" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update soon
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Whole SheBang" from lilsis
Review:
You are missing part of the conversation between Xander and Angel.


...I make sure my lessons stick, un.”



Xander looked at Angel sharply, then replied with a small grin.



Angel’s eyes widened and Xander laughed. He slipped off the railing and walked over to the table to re-arm himself...
Review By [lilsis] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Whole SheBang" from Orchamus
Review:
Xandara 1, Romeo and Juliet knock offs 0.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Whole SheBang" from murdock
Review:
that last chapter was awesome. i want so see more lots more.
Review By [murdock] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations are a Bang!" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [21 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations are a Bang!" from CathalPicard
Review:
Very Cool!
Review By [CathalPicard] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations are a Bang!" from Selias
Review:
Hells yes! Reminds me of The New Dawn In Sunnydale, but that's Ok, because it was a good story (for only three chapters) before the author stopped updating. Hope you update again soon, because Deidara is awesome.
Comments from author:
The New Dawn is probably the one I read that prompted me to write one of my own. Because that's why I'm trying to write this, totally dissapointed about lack of updates, lol.
Review By [Selias] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations are a Bang!" from eriktheviking
Review:
An interesting set of reactions, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations are a Bang!" from LucyH
Review:
Just wanted to drop a note and say I'm enjoying your story quite a lot. Normally I don't read the Naruto cross-over fics because I only have a passing understanding of the show and characters but I tend to be curious of the Halloween episode rewrites. Obviously the curiosity won out and I have to say I really am enjoying what you have put out so far and can't wait to see more.

I am curious how Xander will hide his hands from the rest of the world because I cannot recall if Deidara actually wore gloves or not in his normal outfit but I think he didn't. Will Xander have to figure out something like what the ANBU ninjas wore or more like Miroku (Inu Yasha) to hide his hands when he doesn't need them? I'm curious to find out! ^^
Comments from author:
Actually you gave me food for though, at first, seeing as the mouths don't have lips or anything...just keep them closed and they look like a palm line. But I like the idea of maybe fingerless gloves or something of the like. I'll have to look into it.

I really appreciate your review, seeing as it's given me an idea I hadn't thought about.
Review By [LucyH] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations are a Bang!" from MikaMustang
Review:
*dances happily* yay! Xander can make bangs now!!
Hm.. Wonder how everyone at school is gonna act when they see him... Hm.. No one sees him much anyway, so most likely comments on his hair... Hm...
Oh my! How is he gonna hide the hand-mouth-things? *_*
SO MANY QUESTIONS!!
Wanna know how I find out??
You. Yes you. Update this story!
See!
I like this plan. You should stick to this plan =3
Anyhow, great chapter, really do hope you update soon =3
Comments from author:
OMG I lol-ed so hard when I read your comment. As for the hand mouth....as long has he keeps them shut I suppose they'd just be lines in his palms. That is what I was figuring anyway.
Review By [MikaMustang] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween Goes Out With A Bang" from MikaMustang
Review:
Haha. Poor Giles, now he has to carry Xand.
YAY!
FUN FUN FUN!!!
Lol ^^
I can't wait to see what our favorite artist leaves behind in our little Xander's body. *smirks*
Do hope you update again soon, I enjoyed this /very/ much =}
Comments from author:
I plan to update at least once today, but I've also got work and school so I dunno if my plans gonna work, lol. As for Xander, let's just say....life's gonna be a bang, yeah? ^.^
Review By [MikaMustang] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween Goes Out With A Bang" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting choice of character for the crossover, lots of fun mayhem to come, I hope. Thanks.
Comments from author:
I appreciate your comment and yes....I plan for a lot of chaos....I will surely do Janus proud. ^.^
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Halloween Goes Out With A Bang" from SwedishFrog
Review:
PLEASE feed me moar :DDDD
Comments from author:
Lol, I'll post one or two chapters a day hopefully, but chpt 2 is it for today
Review By [SwedishFrog] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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