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Review of chapter "Captured" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
hmmm I like that this story is planning on saving Gabriel and perhaps making happy endings for all, but everything happened so quickly in not many words that it doesn't flow as well as it could.

Also, this is just me but I would advise marking 'angel-cest' in the author notes, like they do for livejournal fics that feature the angels in a sexual relationship with each other. You marked slash but since the angels are technically brothers it's typically thought of as common courtesy to mark 'angel-cest'- just like Dean/Sam stories get marked 'wincest'.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Comments are always wanted
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Brotherly Love" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
I am pleased that Lucifer wants to save Gabriel! Gabriel dying made me sooooo sad :(
Comments from author:
Thanks. Comments are always great to get
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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