I really like this story! I especially like the way that you've written Dawn.. and how she bosses around the Cullens! Poor Lorne - good to see him; hope Faith didn't wreck his new place too much! Is Giles still in the picture? He would make a good source for Dawn's research, I would think. As much as I enjoy this, I can't give it a 10 as it has not been updated in 7 months! I know are still writing, because you just updated " I Just Want To Know Where I Came From". So will you please please please update this?
It's impressive how the 'baby' of the family becomes so commanding when nessisary. Course, now that there's an actual baby she might never be the 'baby' of the family.
Review of chapter "Mystical Sonogram" from Kitlynn
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I truly enjoyed the chapters you have written and I am looking forward to updates. I think the premise of the story is promising.
Review By [Kitlynn] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mystical Sonogram" from Dragonelf
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More soon, yes?
::Gives the plot bunny a Carrot Muffin::
# = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # "I am Grey. I stand between the candle and the star. We are Grey. We stand between the darkness and the light." - Delenn, Babylon 5 # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mystical Sonogram" from chrysanthemum
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This story is hilarious and awesome. I hope you come back and finish it! Adding Dawn and the Scoobies really makes things exciting - now we need some werewolf action and it will be just perfect. Oh, and I love Dawn's method for coming up with a way to deliver the baby :)
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Lovely to see another great chapter. The story is just getting better and better. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for a geat read. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mystical Sonogram" from Vickzie
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Lmao, brilliant story so far. Please update soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mystical Sonogram" from Nightscream
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Is it weird I like the fanfiction more then the actual books/movies?
Keep up the good work. This has been a fun read so far.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mystical Sonogram" from Bobboky