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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fayari
Review:
Take away his loved ones, a man truly has nothing to live for.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Sad that it only takes a couple of moments of change to completely change the story. I'm glad Xander stuck it out to the end, especially as it was an end he worked against right till the last.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cbq
Review:
Wow, you weren't kidding about the dark. Good story though. Thanks for writing it.
Review By [cbq] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This story is very depressing at first glance. HOWEVER--

It's important. This story is VERY important, as Xander has imagined it rather often. You know the saying, "There, but for the grace of God, go I?"

..this is Xander's interpretation of it.
Comments from author:
*nods* Very much so. It would have been so easy for things to go wrong in Sunnydale and it's a miracle a bunch of ADD high school kids do as well as they did. But I love them. I do. Xander always steps up to the plate when the world is on the line... but without the Scoobs, will the Mayor's ascension go through? *shrugs*
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Thewander
Review:
Dark and twisted. very good
Review By [Thewander] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RandomSelection
Review:
Certainly dark, but well written and plausible ... the Scoobies have had A LOT of luck during the series!
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great writing of the descent into despair.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cathyoden
Review:
That is not what we want to see for Xander! A litany of dark, futile deaths ending in a trip to hell. That wasn't just dark it was a big DOWNER! We want "Crossbows".
Comments from author:
Well, I was feeling down when I wrote it! Anyway, I am working on Crossbows. Next chapter should be done before the month is out if that's any consolation.
Cheerio.
Review By [cathyoden] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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