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Review of chapter "Nothing Hurts More Than Rejection" from jaycatt
Review:
OK, now that I've read this chapter... Shue? And Artie? Man, that burns!

Brilliant move with Shue, though. I remember pretty well what it was like to be a gay kid and have a favorite teacher unexpectedly pop out with something homophobic. Polite and well-meaning, but so infuriatingly smug and utterly ignorant... God.

You're a genius.
Review By [jaycatt] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing Hurts More Than Rejection" from jaycatt
Review:
This is amazing. I can't believe I found such a beautiful, unique Glee fic on TTH. Totally unexpected. You have a real gift. Thank you for sharing something this special with the world. I didn't know Glee could be made to pull at the heart strings any more than it already does!

Since this is a BtVS site, I have to ask... Is there fic out there with an MTF slayer? The spell, being a thing of magic, would obviously work based on the soul, not the body...

Just throwing it out there.

Thank you for this story. I love what you've done with Vanessa!
Comments from author:
I know that there are two fics on AO3 involving FTM slayers. One has Buffy being ftm, and the other is an OC. Rivulet027 is working on a Glee crossover where Mike is an MTF vampire slayer, but I don't know if it's been revealed yet. I think the fic is called something like "The Boy Who Disappeared"

Glad you like it.
Review By [jaycatt] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wearing a mask is the best way to smother yourself" from Angelskuuipo
Review:
This is fascinating and a really beautiful story. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens at prom.
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [6 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wearing a mask is the best way to smother yourself" from GeassKingBankai
Review:
I love your story please finish the next chapter soon.
Review By [GeassKingBankai] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wearing a mask is the best way to smother yourself" from BigDestiny
Review:
I came across this story about a month ago, and honestly it's so good I'm actually having a hard time reviewing it. I've met a lot of trans people in my life (although only two before they started transitioning), and it feels a little indecent to follow up such a sensitive, thoughtful portrayal with 'OMG! SQUEEE!' Even if that's been my actual reaction for such scenes as Puck kissing Vanessa, and Burt standing up for her.
I really love the support system you've built for Vanessa, especially the relationships between Vanessa and Kurt, and Vanessa and Burt. Kurt maneuvered Finn into coming out very deftly, and I was touched by the fact that he refused to stay safely at Dalton while Vanessa stayed at McKinley. It was interesting that Burt had honestly considered the possibility that Kurt might be trans; it's never been mentioned on the show, but it's totally believable. The only surprise was how badly Mike reacted (I too thought he'd be more okay with it), but then it seems like everyone is coming around so I guess it's just water under the bridge.
Are you still planning on doing a 'funeral' for Finn, or did that happen already and we just didn't see it. I hope I didn't miss it. As much as I love Nessa, and am glad that she's getting to be herself, I think I need that closure too. In my experience, as much as one supports a person that's going through transition, there's still that feeling like you're saying goodbye to the person that you knew before. And I'd like to be able to say goodbye to your Finn.
This is a great story. Thank you so much for it. I am bound and determined to review more often.
Comments from author:
Wow. Okay, so, long review, thank you! I'm exhausted, but I didn't want to go to bed without replying, so I'll try to stay coherent. :) About Mike--in my experience, some of the nicest, sweetest people in the world can also be the most intolerant, especially if they've been poisoned from a young age by their parents. Yes, I'm still planning the funeral for Finn, but it's not going to happen until they're on summer break.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I'm sorry it's taking me so long to get the next chapter out, real life is doing that annoying thing where it interrupts your fanfiction and keeps you all busy and stuff. Meh. Real life, who needs it? ;-) I'm very glad you like this!
Review By [BigDestiny] • Date [14 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wearing a mask is the best way to smother yourself" from DesitaniaF
Review:
love it! what was that song Vanessa sang?
Comments from author:
It's in the notes. It's "Fast car" by Tracy Chapman. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dl6yilkU1LI
Glad you like it!
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wearing a mask is the best way to smother yourself" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Okay, totally typing this up as I read... LOL!

Yay! I'm a cheerleader! As long as it comes with a cute outfit, I'm happy, lol!

*giggles* I love Puck and Blaine. Those two are freakin' hilarious together. Operation get-Blaine-laid-in-New-York-City, lol! And I love how they tease each other, it's great!

Love the bus scene with all the couples, especially Vanessa/Puck and Brittana, they both made me smile. :-) And I loved Papa Bear!Burt. He's so awesome! :-D

YAY! for Will finally getting it! And I love how Vanessa imagined she was singing to Puck instead of Rachel. :-)

LMFAO! Okay, so I thought I hadn't heard of the song Vanessa sings when you told me about it...but I have. Only it was Christian Kane singing it instead. Now I'll have to go listen to this version and see what the difference is, cos I LOVE Christian Kane's version.

Aww, I love Mandy! Definitely hope to see more of her. It's awesome to see Vanessa acting as a role model for someone.

The scene with Puck and Vanessa was just complete and total perfection! Love the Noah and Nessa thing. And the kiss was so sweet! Vanessa's insecurities were adorable and totally believable, and Puck's reassurances were so sweet. I was totally grinning by the end of the scene!

....And now I want the next chapter....*pouts* Keep in mind that I have three more banners for this for you, lol!

But yeah, awesome chapter! I loved it! Definitely can't wait for Prom!!!

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
Christian Kane sings fast car? *flails* Must locate this!!!!!

I'm hoping that Mandy will show up again. Vanessa and Lisa can help her out 'cause they're awesome. I haven't actually figured out where Mandy lives yet, lol.

I will try to get the next chapter soonish. It depends on how fast it wants to write itself in my head.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wearing a mask is the best way to smother yourself" from AzrielSunHawk
Review:
*SQUEEEL*!!! SO VERY AWESOME!!
Comments from author:
It's not too much, too fast? I was gonna leave the first kiss until chapter 11, but the rooftop was kinda perfect.

I'm glad you like it!
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breaking Up is Hard to Do" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
*grins* I love the Puck/Vanessa in this chapter, it had me grinning like mad!

But...there was one thing wrong with this chapter... :-( There was no 'Next Chapter' button at the bottom. :-( You should fix that, ya know...

More soon, please? Pretty, pretty please? I'm not above resorting to bribery. You get a new chapter up and I'll make you a banner to go with this. Deal? *grins*
Comments from author:
I have 5 big WIPS: "Pretty Girl", "Through Time and Space," "Four Square," "Dawn Potter," "One Song Glory," and two big bangs. Well, I also have "Once More with Glee" but that's on hod until I figure out where to take it.

I also have my Kaine ficlet series' and a Puck angst fill on the angst meme.

I try t work on them in spurts, lol, not focusing on one too much, though that doesn't always work.

I promise I won't turn my nose up at any banners or fanart, though. :D

There will be more Pretty Girl soonish, the next chapter involves Nationals, Junior Prom, and Quinn removing her head from her ass.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Freedom is Being Comfortable in Your Own Skin" from DemonChildeKyra
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*grins* I'm loving the interaction between Vanessa and Puck! You can tell that they're headed in that direction, but it isn't rushed, its all very natural. Very, very well written. :-) And yay! Quinn's pulling her head out of her ass! And Burt's awesome! But that's nothing new, lol!
Comments from author:
Keep reading, one more chapter! That means I'll have to write some more!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from DemonChildeKyra
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You're welcome! Though you should feel all kinds of special, I hardly ever review every chapter of a fic that already has multiple parts posted.

Considering I haven't read Four Square or Dawn Potter yet, I'm voting for Through Time And Space... LOL! And while I'm sad that it won't be Ten in that fic, I have seen a couple episodes with Eleven and I do like him, I'm just used to Ten. Plus I think Ten's hotter, lol! Oh! And if Jack showing up will mean a Kurt/Puck/Jack threesome, then I DEFINITELY want Jack to show up!!!

Now on to the review for this chapter! Damn you! You made me like Blaine! *pouts*
Comments from author:
*cheers victorious* Blaine is awesome!

I love Eleven.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Nothing Hurts More Than Rejection" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Can I just say how much I love Brittany? Cos I do. And she would so totally react like that. And I'm glad Santana chose Brittany over any discomfort she had with Vanessa. Also, I wanna smack Schue! But go Lauren! And Yay! for a GSA at McKinley.

*goes to read more*
Comments from author:
I just wanna thank you for taking the time to review every chapter. You are AWESOME. Watching these pop into my inbox today has just brightened my day considerably. It's approaching 1 AM, but I don't want to go to bed, so I'm gonna finish rewatching Doctor Who series 5 then try and write more of Through TIme and Space. Although, I really need to work on Four Square and Dawn Potter otherwise a riot might happen. ;-)
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Awwww! *huggles Vanessa* Stupid football jocks! But on the plus side, Kurt's going back to McKinley! Yay!!! And Sam's part of the group now, also yay!!!
Comments from author:
Yay for Vanessa and Kurt together at McKinley!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Friend is a Single Soul Dwelling in Two Bodies" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Okay, it didn't actually take me that long to read that chapter! lol! Unfortunately I had to go pick my mom up just as I got to Vanessa opening the door and Puck being there. I kinda wanted to scream....

I absolutely loved this chapter! I love how accepting Puck is being without being too OOC. I especially loved how he showed up with flowers cos your supposed to have flowers when you apologize to a girl. :-) So cute.

And yay! Sam and Vanessa will be friends! I can't wait!

*goes to read more*
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Purpose of Family is to Love You Always" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Okay, I'll admit that your Blaine isn't too bad.... I suppose I can deal with this being Kurt/Blaine *sighs* But only because it's you and your Blaine doesn't completely suck and and make me wanna strangle him, lol. I'm definitely looking forward to Puck's reaction to Vanessa and seeing how they end up together. And with the Sam/Quinn pairing, does that mean that we'll be seeing quite a bit of Sam and Quinn, or is it more of a background pairing? I'm definitely hoping to see lots of them, cos I totally think Sam would make an awesome friend for Vanessa, especially with how cool he was about Kurt being gay.

Next chapter! *goes to read*
Comments from author:
Sam and Vanessa will totally be friends!
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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