Review of chapter "Chapter One" from corbinmichael
Wow. INSANE Buffy favoritism. Have you ever even watched Sanctuary. With the scenarios you've created, Buffy would've been stopped at Tesla, let alone gone up against any of the others. Druitt would have teleported her head away or a sword into her. NO WAY Buffy Anne Summers outsmarts JAMES FREAKIN' WATSON-and a Helen Magnus, with prep time?! That's like saying the Buffster could take out a Batman that KNOWS SHE'S COMING! As I asked before-have you EVER even watched Sanctuary?!
Review By [corbinmichael
] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Buffy was cold, but she was trying desperately to be "normal" after a stay in an institution.
Even before she took up Slaying again, se had serious and justified trust issues.
I agree that the Council snagging her at the right time would have made for a very diffrent and probably far nastier Buffy Summers.
She wasn't quite a bitch in the canon.. but the Wishverse makes it all rather possible.
Review By [CrystalBlaze
] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PATM
I'm glad this one is a one off only (?) Was Buffy that much into reading in this series? Having her looking at reports as if she always does is kind of a whiplash moment. But she is comparing lives and seeing what scarred Buffy did due to a wish, is forcing her to read the reality 'verse version of having been introduced to people she had never met and being instrumental in their deaths by her hand in the other time line, awesome! Yeah it is a rant but I really can't review, it's nothing but impressions any how.
Review By [PATM
] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from draconis
I quite enjoyed the previous stories, and most of this story...but you lost me COMPLETELY in that last section (that starts with "Buffy went through the various formulas again...").
I haven't a clue what you're trying to accomplish with that last section. Clearly Buffy changed from or reverted to a different reality from the one where she was taking out The Five, but I don't see any linear connection with the previous reality. Is this some kind of THIRD reality? If so, what purpose does it serve in the story? It doesn't seem to tie anything together nor does it provide closure to the story. It just seems to come out of nowhere and leads nowhere.
Comments from author:
reality returned to normal the wish was done Giles smashed Anya necklace. This is more of a what B could have done before coming to Sunnydale fic. Face it she was a cold hearted bitch when she showed up.
Review By [draconis
] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]