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Review of chapter "Job offer" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
nicely done. great short tale. also a great starting point for a longer tale. very good read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Job offer" from Geyer
Review:
Very nice. Supervising Spike and Illyria might give Jack a better appreciation for what Hammond went through as his commander--it can't be easy being in charge of someone who's snarky, irreverent, delights in taunting bad guys, is constantly in trouble, and doesn't always follow orders, but manages to save the world on a regular basis. I hope you decide to show us more of this universe, because I'm pretty sure Spike is going to accept the job offer.
Comments from author:
Hm, I just wondered who you were describing - Spike or Jack...

I wrote it as a one shot. It's intended to stay like that. It's possible that I decide in the future to make a series of ficlets in this universe however.

And I have to say I like the idea of them working together, I just see the biting snark and sarcasm all around.
I just remembered that I didn't give this a timesetting in the SG-verse, imagine poor Hammond with both of them and Illyria running amok in his base...
Review By [Geyer] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Job offer" from Oddshot
Review:
A good one off story short and punchy or a very smart teaser for a on going story of Blue & Spike on Stargate.

a Interested fan.
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Job offer" from Gideon
Review:
Nice work. Jack seems remarkably well informed, maybe this was after he became a general and got a wider briefing? A good example of using all the assets at hand, no matter who or what they may be.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Jack is a pragmatic guy all in all
Review By [Gideon] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Job offer" from cwolf
Review:
Well, the word slips my mind. But I know for a fact that Agnostic isn't a type of demon in the buffy series. heh
Comments from author:
Ouch, how could I miss this.
Well, it's repaired
Review By [cwolf] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Job offer" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
I liked this. It was a straight forward plot. The length worked and it ended at just the right spot. The last line was something Spike would say or think. This was wonderful as a one shot, a glimpse into another beginning. It could stay as is, but could also spawn a series of stories. Either way works, but I do admit liking "Job Offer" better as a one shot. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.
It's intended to stay like that. It's possible that I decide in the future to make a series of ficlets in this universe but there wont be a long story.
So, should I change it, just ignore everything after chapter 1 :)
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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