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Review of chapter "The Resolution in the Office" from Angelfirenze
Review:
Well, for a hardcore Buffy/Angel shipper on an apparent pilgrimage to a foreign land, this was amazing. I can set all that aside, along with my almost complete ignorance of anything Bones-related, to say this was an awesome ride and that I do believe the only thing that could have possibly improved it was the group taking the time to possibly rebury Kathy's bones, especially since it's obvious Angel/Booth never did attend her funeral. Seeing his parents' graves might have been an interesting situation, as well, but the story can live without both.

Either way, bravo once again!
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [29 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Resolution in the Office" from slmncpm
Review:
wonderful! yay!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Resolution in the Office" from draconis
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Did you know you have a number of sentences that appear to be truncated? BTW, this occurs in both your stories in the series to date. It may be due to some problem in your text formatting when you submit your text to the website.

I don't know if any of them are sufficiently important that previously published chapters need to be edited/corrected, but you may want to look for it in your future chapters.

Example (this one is in 22...there are other incidents in both stories)
"It... it doesn't matter," she said, wishing that she sounded


Edit: responding to author query
If they don't materially affect understanding, then no impact. Just the minor hiccup while reading. Since it could have been a format/encoding-decoding issue I thought you might need to know about it...not intended as a significant negative.
Comments from author:
Just a couple of areas where I forget to finish my sentences; hope it didn't impact your enjoyment of the story.
Review By [draconis] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Resolution in the Office" from RocksandGlass
Review:
I enjoyed this a lot, and definitely satisfied with the ending, felt rather "Bones"-like in fact.
Comments from author:
Thanks; glad you liked it.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Meetings in the Aftermath" from slmncpm
Review:
but i don't want him to leave them!!!
Comments from author:
What he's planning to do and what he will do aren't always the same thing...
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Battle of the Mental Hospital" from Bluejello
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I'd say that was a pretty good end to Angelus. And that last little bit between Booth and Brennen was adorable.
But... *whispers* you accidentally wrote "Sweets" once where you meant Zach, when Booth starts monologuing.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Truth of the Apprentice" from Angelfirenze
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Aaaaaand, you've managed to be even more evil, congratulations. I really hope Booth is wrong and that things won't completely fall apart because of this. Cordy came around really quickly by comparison even after being affected by Sunnydale Blindness all her life and not only did her fair share of world-saveage, but got her hands dirty dissecting demons and helping the helpless and it was HER choice.

I admit I don't know much about the Squints, but they're still human, no matter how analytical. Even autistic people like myself can have flexible minds and use them to our advantage so I really, really don't think Booth should count them all out, even Brennan. They're all trying their best and he should know that they know he is, too, and that they can come out of this with their lives intact if they try hard enough to salvage their bond with one another.
Comments from author:
Well, you know Angel; always trying to think about doing the 'right' thing for others even if that involves pushing them away from him...

Regarding whether it'll work... well, that's a different matter; as you said, even the most fixed minds can adapt to the most incredible circumstances.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fireman Without a Face" from Angelfirenze
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...Holy...*blinks* This is just as awesome as that reveal during ANGEL: After the Fall's later chapters where Juliet Landau helped write a story for what Dru was doing the whole time! Whoa! Genius, my friend!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it; hope that the confrontation with Dru herself lives up to those standards.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fireman Without a Face" from KalaongX
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Just had a freaky idea. Who can remember a certain ultraviolent punk who was a shy, sensitive geek before he became a vampire?

If William the Bloody Awful Poet could become Spike, would Zach Addy the vampire become an undead cross between a John Woo villain and MacGyver?
Review By [KalaongX] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fireman Without a Face" from Gideon
Review:
Looks like the gang found out who this was pretty quick. What does this tell them about who the next victim(s) will be? Angel was smart to call in Riley but if Riley can't provide some manpower with the training to deal with Vampires then he needs to call in the Slayers. They can work in teams of three or more if they can't take Angelus on their own, and some teams hunting him would cut down on his freedom of movement if nothing else. Also Buffy being there might provide a new target for him, one that can protect herself. Also - how did Drusilla get into Booth's apartment? None of the FBI Guys lived there so they couldn't have invited her in, right?
Comments from author:
I'm assuming that their status as guards on the apartment gave them the equivalent of 'squatter's rights'- like how Faith was able to invite Angel into the apartment she was using after she beat up the original resident-, but as for everything else...

Well, things are approaching a climax; let's leave it at that.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Fireman Without a Face" from Eureka
Review:
DRU??? HE pulled Dru into this? Who is next? Are they gonna be able to save Zach?
Comments from author:
I'll just say this; things are approaching a climax.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Warning in the Message" from CrazyCamera
Review:
I really like this story.. I can not wait to see which of the old gang comes to DC.. I figure Xander for sure as he did make a promise to Angelus and I wonder how "Booth" and he would get along.. and forget about Faith or Buffy! Please keep up the great work!
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Evaluation of a Psychopath" from faimyest
Review:
I love it!

The last scene with Angelus and Sweet is amazing!!
Comments from author:
What can I say; Angelus is not a nice man, and I wanted something that would ensure that the squints understood the kind of sheer psychopathic evil they're up against.
Review By [faimyest] • Date [12 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Request for the Old Contact" from dreameralways
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Riley didn't leave until after the fall of the Initiative in Sunnydale. And does Angel even realize that while it might be messy to his life to call in the slayers, if he had right from the beginning instead of being so bull headed and stubborn (just like at the end of the show Angel) Sweets wouldn't be hurt, Sully would still be alive, and Angelus would be toast by now, but no, he has to handle everything himself. Angel can be a really big idiot.
Comments from author:
Slayers wouldn't really be practical as Angelus hasn't put himself in a position where he can just be beaten to death; so far he's playing a 'game' that the squint squad can compete with, and he's too skilled for most of the currently-active Slayers to just take him down that easily anyway.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Second Choice in the Warehouse" from mendenbar
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Revelations can be so painful. At least someone has seen both Booth and Angelus at the same time so that should help (yeah, I know, not much.)
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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