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Review of chapter "Faded." from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good start
Comments from author:
Wow,

Thank you for the review. Yeah, i have been trying to find the time to continue it but i just don't at the moment.

More will come before June. swear that. Love your name, aria is one of my favourite names.

Xia.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Faded." from Xeelia
Review:
I love Dawn in AB world stories, that said this one has utterly confused. Is this the beginning of a story or a one shot? Also you mention that Dawn has long hair then say she has a bob, which is short. I hope that this is not a one shot because it's a wonderful premise to a great story.
Comments from author:
Oh goody - it was meant to be confusing because were the feelings i was trying to paint a picture of - hopelessness and despair - confusion etc. It is part of a series and if i have the time and the spark i will write more - i just need to figure out how to get the idea i have in my head
- down on paper.

So it could be a one-shot or a story. Oops, thanks for bringing that to my attention, i just automatically wrote Dawn as long-haired then i thought - oh cool Dawn with a bob - thanks for mentioning it.

Oh, thank you for your great review. Keep watch for more. XIA. Love it if you recced me. Thanks.
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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