Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

A Slayer in Shreveport

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
I enjoyed this story. I like how you set it before the Southern Vampire novels, so that I didn't have to worry about keeping up with the show or any of the new books (I only read the first three). I think you captured the televised version of Eric quite well, and Buffy also. I also... well, I don't want to say _liked_, so let's go with _appreciated_, that you allowed Tara to die. Too many writers rewriting the sixth season (including me) find ways to save her.

I do think the writing was a tad clunky at times (and overly descriptive on Buffy's clothing as it happens), and I would suggest going back to the chapters in third-person and just revising them to be first-person, rather than shifting midway through.

Overall, I think this was pretty good, and I look forward to the next one. Which I'm going to go read now. 'scuse me.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Wonderful story that I enjoyed reading!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from PATM
Review:
Ok! A decent resolution with option for Wacky machinations by evil Inc. Will Sookie make an appearance? In other words, write another one.
Comments from author:
hahahaha i will definitely write another one. Not sure when, but there will definitely be another one!

As for Sookie...I'm not sure! =)
Review By [PATM] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Angelsgirl
Review:
Love it.....awww it's over please tell me you are going to write another one!! :)
Comments from author:
I probably won't be able to stay away so no worries =) hahaha
Review By [Angelsgirl] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Misty
Review:
'I turned to Buffy. I picked up her hand and slapped it. “Bad Buffy! Bad!” ' Funniest line ever! Thank you for a great story & I hope you come back & do a sequel one day in the future :)
Comments from author:
You know, I originally didn't have that line in there. I actually had completely forgotten about the blood bond. I remembered at the last second and wrote it in. I laughed too. haha ;)
Review By [Misty] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from CassiopeiaHastur
Review:
Great Story - sad to See that is has come to an end now ;)
Comments from author:
When one door closes, another opens ;)
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
awww for sweet. : )
Comments from author:
Thank you! =)
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
I'm glad Buffy has a vampire she feels she can trust. Too bad Eric didn't rip Spike apart though.
Comments from author:
I know, right?! =)
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Blackett
Review:
please update soon. I'm so glad that you are continuing this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! =)
Review By [Blackett] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am curious how having Eric in town will change things here. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! =)
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Kaleidofox
Review:
Oh snaps. I can't believe that just happened. o.0

Anxiously await the next chapter!!
Comments from author:
hahaha ;)
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Malyce
Review:
Well all I can say is that it BETTER NOT be over! :P Lovely story, nice characterisations. Buffy is Buffy and Eric is Eric. I would love to see how Eric handles being on the Sunnydale hellmouth.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Update should be soon! =)
Review By [Malyce] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
awww I really enjoyed it so far and I am glad to hear that more is coming. Looking forward to it.
Comments from author:
Thanks! =)
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Aeryn
Review:
So glad this isn't over yet, although I have been thinking of what you could call the sequel.........A Sheriff in Sunnyhell.......or A Viking does Halloween on the hellmouth, heh heh.
Comments from author:
hahahaha A Sheriff in Sunnyhell...good one. hahahahahaha =)
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Wrytergrrrl
Review:
I'm glad this story isn't over yet, cause while I'm glad that Dawn and Hadley have been rescued, there haven't been any smoochies between Eric and Buffy yet. ;)
Comments from author:
hehehe no, there have not ;]
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Page: 1 of 2 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking