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Review of chapter "Karma Chameleon" from Letomo
Review:
Now this is a nice universe! Well, not really, but you know what I mean. Very cool switch, and an enjoyable story. Glad you shared it!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Karma Chameleon" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nicely twisted!
Comments from author:
Thanks :D

As long as they keep heading towards a definite goal, without taking the time to really stop and look at themselves, they're only going to get worse ;)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Karma Chameleon" from Ramenth
Review:
On the one hand, this is well written and very interesting.

On the other hand, the Mayors plan is to be mayor of Cleavland. That's about on par with trying to conquer Detroit in the 'You are welcome to it.' category.
Comments from author:
Thanks :D

Heh. One problem - If he gets a good grip on a town it might very well lead to him to getting a good grip on its people ;)
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Karma Chameleon" from CPTSkip
Review:
RAOTFLMAO! This is one of the best The Mayor Wins stories I've ever read. The only problem is it is too short. I'd love to read more. Hint, hint. Lol! I wonder if Glory's "brother" is attached to Glory's body or to her "soul"? Wouldn't Whats-his-name be surprised when he shows up all dressed in black leather.
Comments from author:
Yah. Moreover, how will the 'new' Dawn react to him popping up? Especially if the memory-repression spell prevents anyone connecting him to Faith ;)

Thanks. I'm glad it works. An awful lot of the 'game-imbalancing' artifacts were destroyed in the show, sometimes due to shortsightedness. Just trying them out in new places :)


Here's an example of the Trio using their inventions to take out Glory. I love the concept of them trying it and their plan here is very well-executed:
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-9291/Greywizard+The+Nerds+Strike+Back.htm
The fic takes an improbably direct route to the Trio becoming amazingly successful in life, one that I find lacking in both internal drama/insults/strife and therapy/healing/soul-searching. The tone is cheery and full of pep, following a backstory of anger and character death. Other than that, quite entertaining :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Karma Chameleon" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Kittens for target practice...priceless!

Enjoyed this story immensely even if it was a bit short.

DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I covered the three core ideas I had for the fic and stopped :D

Ben's been suggested for a follow-up chapter, might be interesting to see him interact with Dawn...

Any scene requests? :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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