Very nice to see some new updates and a pretty good story so far. Since Buffy seems to be into mysterious older guys then Alexander will be a much better choice than Angel ever could be, not to mention that he's much much stronger if even Buffy can't lift the dragonslayer, though I think she probably could given enough practice. I'm interested in seeing how Willow will have faired without Xander there at all. Regardless I'm definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Its a shame that you haven't updated this story since may. I really like the chapters you've published so far. Anyway there are some points I would like to make to you and I hope that you will take thm into consideration if you ever continue this fic.
1] Alexander's name should remain Alexander and not be shortened to Xander.
2] If your story is going to have a pairing, the females are limited, imo, to Faith and Cordelia. I lean more toward Faith.
3] No Slayer wanking. From your chapters own written words Alexander has been fighting since he was a child, plus him being Gutts reborn means he's probably stronger and more experienced than a slayer - either Buffy or Faith.
4] Please don't turn him into a emo teenage pussy. Keep him badass.
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]