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Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from Omegaprime
Review:
Wow, now that's an impresive crime.

Zack and Ivy can probably solve the crime but they can keep that item.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

(Mind, I'm not sure Acme really wants custody of a Hellmouth, either....)
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I knew the moment I read the title...

The question of what Carmen would possibly want with it is even more striking than how in the heck she pulled it off.

I have an idea of who may have hired her, however--the Powers That Be.

If this is before Graduation, and it'd have to be as the high school is still there, then they might have gone to a grey agent to avoid upsetting the balance but get the Ascension well and truly scuttled..
Comments from author:
There are some things it may be best not to speculate about too closely....

Meanwhile, thank you! I'm glad you liked this.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from SamDragon
Review:
Well,a heck of a theft but why would you want it.
Comments from author:
With Carmen, it's often not so much about the wanting as about stealing things just because she can.

And thank you!
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job, but why make these interesting stories so short?
Comments from author:
It's the nature of the form; drabbles are, by definition, supposed to be exactly 100 words. [Give or take a couple, as word counts seem to vary a bit from archive to archive and word-processor to word-processor.]

Also, this series consists specifically of drabbles written for one of the LiveJournal challenge communities spun off from this site, so there's the additional dimension of writing to a prompt, and bringing in the crossover element. Which makes for a definite challenge in the space of 100 words....

In any case, I'm glad you liked this one.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Had a nice little laugh at that. Nice job.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from TAO
Review:
*Snicker*

Made me laugh. Thankfully, I wasn't drinking a mocha this time and didn't choke from laughing.


When you had the two kids appear, I thought for a moment that it was Martin Mystery and Diana for some reason.
Comments from author:
Not choking is good; laughing is also good. Thank you!

I've seen only a tiny bit of the Martin Mystery series, when it was (very briefly) on either the Fox or WB (pre-CW) Saturday morning kids' block. I recall being at least mildly intrigued, but the series went away too quickly for me to get a real handle on the characters and specific continuity.
Review By [TAO] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from texaswookie
Review:
I'm with Buffy, why would they want it back?
Comments from author:
If this were more than a drabble, it would probably turn out that moving the Hellmouth creates cosmic instability of epic proportions, such that it has to be put back or apocalyptic disaster ensues. (Besides, Carmen has always been better at stealing things than figuring out where to keep them afterwards....)
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Hey, if it was stolen, that means the baddies can't open it. Carmen's thief, not an end-the-world-type villain.
Comments from author:
We hope the baddies can't open it. (And/or that Carmen knew what she was doing when she stole it; she doesn't have a lot of established background in matters magical. Someone may have given her Very Bad Advice about potential ultimate crimes....)
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where in the World...?" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome! She can keep it :D
Comments from author:
What, and break Zack & Ivy's perfect string of Carmen-busts? :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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