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Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from bex
Review:
Oh he still has his 'Spark' this was wonderful
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it! :-)
Review By [bex] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from Musicalife
Review:
After.
Comments from author:
I definitely want to do one, I just have to figure out exactly what I want to happen and how.
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from Alyse
Review:
Loved this! You definitely need to do a follow up story, about when they get to Pitts, and Dru ends up turning Justin or Brian turns him..or something...and then maybe Brian, Justin and Dru visiting L.A. and/or Sunnydale and freaking everyone out or something...lol.. Anyway, I can't wait until your next QAF-related story! Happy Writing! =)

~Alyse
Comments from author:
*grins* Glad you liked it. I have a few ideas for a sequel, it's mostly a matter of figuring out what exactly I want to happen. I hadn't considered visits to LA or Sunnydale, but it's definitely something to keep in mind...
Review By [Alyse] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from ianquest
Review:
Excellent! Great characterisation and storytelling: I could see everything happening as clearly as if it was an episode! Now all you need to do is write the sequel where he goes home and demonstrates to Justin exactly why not needing to breathe during a blowjob is a spectacular advantage, Dru turns Justin (who also keeps his soul, of course), and they all (un)live happily ever after! ;)
Comments from author:
LMAO! Okay, yeah, so I read your review and totally had to laugh. I honestly hadn't thought about the whole blowjob thing for the sequel (which is totally not like me at all, lol), but it's definitely something to keep in mind. I have a few ideas for a sequel, I just have to figure out exactly what I want to do. And hope like hell the Muses cooperate...

And skipping back to the first half of your review, thank you so much for the compliment! :-)

~ Kyra
Review By [ianquest] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from Musicalife
Review:
I like the way you've portrayed Dru here, so innocent/lonely and yet insane at the same time. I would love to see the other side of the coin to this, it would work lovely as a two-shot.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. Dru's one of my favorite characters and just so much fun to play with. And I could definitely see her being lonely, she's never really been alone until Spike chose Buffy over her. Maybe for a short time between the Fyarl demon and Wolfram and Hart finding her, but that would be it. And I just don't see her doing well alone.

As for the other side of the coin...Do you mean doing this from Dru's POV? Showing what she was thinking or feeling like the little bits of Brian's thoughts and feelings that I did in this one. Or did you mean doing a sequel, showing what happens after they go back to Pittsburgh?

Thanks so much for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [Musicalife] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from Annjeela
Review:
I like the idea of Brian forever young. I'm sure he does too.

Nice fic. Thx
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Annjeela] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
I loved it! I like how Dru turned Brian because she was lonely- she needs someone to take care of her and we know Brian's good at that (though he pretends otherwise). I also like that he invited her back to Pittsburgh with him- I love that she knew about Justin.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Dru's one of my favorite characters and I could so see her turning someone just for the company. Not even for someone to take care of her, just the company. Though, Brian really is amazing at taking care of pretty much everyone. And him taking her back to Pittsburgh is just him doing just that, taking care of her.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Young and Pretty Forever" from IceWhisper
Review:
Not exactly the blaze of glory that I'm sure Brian had in mind, but...hey! He'll never have to worry about going gray.

Though what's he supposed to do when it really clicks that he has no reflection? Haha!
Comments from author:
*giggles* I actually tried to fit the reflection thing in, but it just didn't fit anywhere...
Review By [IceWhisper] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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