Interesting new chapter :). You know I'm hoping that Buffy manages to reach an accord with the Rider, right? Not right away, but the sheer panic that Mephisto will undergo will make the long road of Hellfire and tears be well worth it >:).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
the slayer and the rider should merge so mephesto can't take it back .....and who'd you think would win slayer rider Buffy or darth willow
Comments from author:
Now that would be an intense fight. Darth Willow can alter reality itself and do things like control all of the elements and throw meteors at her opponents. The Rider on the other hand is one of the most powerful entities around capable of going head to head with the Hulk and when the Rider is in control has stomped people like Dr. Strange. So while I think Willow might be capable of hurting the Rider because she uses necromancy where Strange doesn't. In the end I think she would ultimately loose though.
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Oh man! What a fight. WHAT A FIGHT! And to see Belthazor even getting into it with the Slayer Rider was impressive! Now, we just need to find out who the new target is.
Review By [Harry] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Pretty good story. A little disappointing that the crow and buffy ended up fighting, considering they're rather like kindred spirits in many ways. Although it was an interesting matchup I suppose. I wonder where this story is going next.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. As for the next stop there's a clue in the story. Mephisto makes a small reference of where to meet. His road. Now what road would a demon refer to as his? Hope that's enough of a clue.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Love this story....u should have Buffy merge her slayer side with the rider permanently so when mestopholese tries to end the contract she's still super fiery Buffy......update soon
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
I may have my differences with Metephisto, but there is one thing that Buffy said about him that is correct: He never just used her and dumped her like the PTB did. No, she signed the deal, and is working to pay it off. And if the Powers don't like her attitude, TOUGH! Its time that they got a shakeup and realized that they cannot keep manipulating people to do their dirty work!
Review By [Harry] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oddly, I can't help but think that except for the whole needs to own her own soul issue, Buffy would actually enjoy herself. First, she's on a road trip, which has to be mostly restful. Second, she gets to destroy the bad guys (and blow things up, though I suspect, if her "reason," hadn't been bound to give her the experience of being a rider, she'd probably be doing a lot less "obvious," destroying). Third, she gets to do something she's good at.
I also can't help, but think it's good for her to be on her own for a bit, in this semi-invincible state. She'll certainly be a more confident person when / if she encounters her friends. Heck, she may even have given up eating like a bird and be treating her slayer side with more respect.
Anyhow, I suppose the real point is that you managed to get me caught up in this idea of yours. Nicely done.
Review By [Katrina] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Crow Eh? Seen a little bit of some of the movies, not enough to know enough about it to make a opinion outside of one Wandererverse tale that needs working on that has Crows in it.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Well, the Charmed Ones now know or at least suspect that The Rider and Buffy are related in some way. Port Columbia does not ring any bells, but I think the next chapter will give me the answers that I need.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
UH OH CHONGO! Seems that Buffy has got the Charmed Ones worried that she might NOT be Buffy, with her tossing Energy balls around. Time for her to find her foe, take him out, and MAYBE earn a few marks off the contract with Scratch.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Its not often that Demons and the Charmed Ones work together! Sounds like the Rider has irrated a few people on both sides of the aisle! Now Albrax had best hope that this time in the other dimension gives him the edge he needs, otherwise, its time to meet Scratch!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]