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Review of chapter "NYC II" from Shadowzahejihog
Review:
Pretty okay.

You have an issue with repeat phrase and redundant sentences though that you need to go back over. Also I'm not sure about the methodology regression. You'd think after crowley she'd start asking for Dossiers and 'assasinating her jobs' Scouting it out disabling the busters then trying for a controlled release and catch.
Review By [Shadowzahejihog] • Date [11 Nov 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NYC II" from raxadian
Review:
Well, is said the Witchblade leases the user when it needs it most, and she is facing the Slayer Rider...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC I" from raxadian
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Ah, so all the ghosts got free again. They should really get something to deal with that.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Haven, Maine" from raxadian
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Can you say X-men?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Friendship Maine" from raxadian
Review:
Would be fun to read a fic were the Scoobies meet (or become) The Adams family.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "San Antonio II" from raxadian
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Yeah, she might as well try to enjoy it.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "San Antonio I" from raxadian
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Ah, this is gonna be fun!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "666" from raxadian
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Ah yes, Buffy is reminded of the price she is paying.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crow II" from raxadian
Review:
It says something when the devil treats Buffy better than the supposed good guys.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crow I" from raxadian
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Ah yes, the Ghost Rider would love The Crow of Vengeance.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed IV" from raxadian
Review:
No matter how much Scratch tries, Buffy will keep doing things her way.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed III" from raxadian
Review:
Buffy is not much of a thinker, isn't she? I mean using a new power in front of the Charmed ones.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed II" from raxadian
Review:
Weird that the power of three did not even work temporally, but then, old Scratch really doesn't want to lose this rider.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed I" from raxadian
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Well, it seems that with a Rider, people ignore the same advice that's good with dealing with the Hulk "Stay away of it."
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pretender-Interlude" from raxadian
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Now, Jarod is a good character. All he needs is someone to guide him.

Wonder what would happen in a runaway Dawn and Jarod meet?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
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