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Something buzzing this way comes...

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Review of chapter "Something buzzing this way comes..." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
You have 'peaked' rather than 'peeked.' Oh, and its is already possessive, no need for an apostrophe.

Cute. I like things drifting through places. Great way to showcase different tactics :D
Comments from author:
Oh, thanks for pointing this out. I've gotten a bit confused when I was writing this fic.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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