Review of chapter "Something buzzing this way comes..." from Shieldage
You have 'peaked' rather than 'peeked.' Oh, and its is already possessive, no need for an apostrophe.
Cute. I like things drifting through places. Great way to showcase different tactics :D
Comments from author:
Oh, thanks for pointing this out. I've gotten a bit confused when I was writing this fic.
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]