Review of chapter "Chapter One" from morgyair
loved the photo moment but keep wanting one with Gibbs or Tony or even Ziva and Dawn or Lizzie
Review By [morgyair
] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sevangel
Awwww, it's so cute. I did play with keeping Ari alive and with Dawn and the baby, as a happy family, and then bringing Gibbs as her father. I thought it would be interesting to see Ari as Gibbs's son-in-law.
Comments from author:
I was thinking about the packet of things for Dawn that Kort's been carrying around, and what if they had thought to get one picture for the baby when she was grown... I think it's best that Ari is dead. Your story line is amazing as per usual. Perfect instincts.
Review By [sevangel
] • Date [6 Feb 11] • Not Rated