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The End of the Trust

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Review of chapter "President Hayes" from Eureka
Review:
Are you going to come back and finish this story?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "President Hayes" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I sure wish it was possible for RuneWitchsakura to come back and continue writing this story!! I so want to see the Trust get their comeuppance!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "President Hayes" from dreameralways
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Where's the rest of this one?
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Attack in Colorado" from ImperialistDog
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The Trust and Kinsey were the weakest parts of the series. Even in RL Kinsey would have been assassinated back in S1, and the NID would have been dealt with permanently by the other agencies it stepped on. Still it's always nice to see them get their payback.
Review By [ImperialistDog] • Date [14 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "President Hayes" from serenityselena
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a very promising start ...
can`t wait to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "President Hayes" from Blackett
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more of this please!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "President Hayes" from burmafrdnow
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The absolute weakest part of the whole SG premise was the NID and the Trust. Neither one ever was believable. The NID would have been destroyed by other agencies that they pissed off. They would have needed the support of mulitiple senators and congressmen; who would never have taken the political risk of being associated with a group that makes the SS look like choirboys. Never made sense and weakened the whole show. And Kinsey was a total joke. A group that has no public support and whose backers would be destroyed by any hint of a connection with them is just another hollywood screw up.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [8 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "President Hayes" from twlight
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Hmm I think I feel sorry for the Trust..... no that was gas. I look forward to more of this so far wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attack in Colorado" from Gideon
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A bit confusing in the first chapter with all of the new characters. Perhaps a little more explanation of the fight scene or the characters might be in order. Hearing about the fights third hand does make it a bit difficult to know who did what to whom. It does help add to the level of urgency though!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Attack in Colorado" from Greywizard
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Have to say, when the Trust decides to screw things up, they don't do things just halfway. ;-)

Enjoying this series a lot.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Attack in Colorado" from Crayshack
Review:
This is quickly becomeing one of my favorite series.
Comments from author:
I'm glad to hear that.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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