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Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from smolder
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I absolutely adore this, Angelfirenze. The connection of Luna to Alice in Wonderland is one that I've loved before but including Xander as her brother and making it a lovely multi-crossover delights me.

The small bit that makes me sad though is Luna's argument with her father - I always took a rather different view of those events. The fact that Luna's father and her were so very close after her mother died (she was basically all he had left in life) and so he was willing to do anything to get her back when she was being held by people known to do terrible things to their captives. I totally understand the stance your Luna took (that it's not what she would have wanted) - it just makes me sad. (And I understand why it is necessary from the simple stance of moving plot along *grin*)

Oh! I also giggled aloud at your inclusion of Luna continuing to call Sirius, Stubby Boardman. There are little things like that - mentioning the toaster that catapulted axe heads in nearly every Fred fic I write is one I do - that I just always love finding slipped in.

I think what I love most, in a general sense, is how you write Luna (who is my very favorite character in HP). How she comforts Harry even as she is upset, her interactions with the Chesire cat, her indignation with Harry for asking for proof. You are just so very in character for her.

And of course Harry's : "I suppose it's about time I followed someone - everyone's always following me...." was just a marvelous line.

This is both a great idea for a fic and you have a wonderful grasp of the characters. I am glad you pointed me over here because I am definitely tracking this fic of yours. :)
Review By [smolder] • Date [14 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
You know, now that I've actually watched the new Alice in Wonderland movie, this fic makes sense. Also, I think it's a wonderful beginning, and I'd love to see what happens next.

Luna and Xander as siblings is an intriguing idea, and it will be fun to watch Xander and Harry both trying to wrap their heads around parents who are somewhere in the neighborhood of 150 years old (at least their mum, I'm guessing their father is much, MUCH older).
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [4 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from Robby
Review:
Awesome story!!

I look forward to seeing where you take it.
Comments from author:
How nice of TtH never to send me this one. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you're enjoying what I've got up so far. I hope to work on this one again very soon.
Review By [Robby] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from KatieKat
Review:
ok I personally like this story and can't wait to read more
Comments from author:
I personally like it, too! Thanks for reading and reviewing, it's been a lot of fun to write and figure out.
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from Christy
Review:
Oh WOW! I'm really enjoying this, and I love how good you are at Wonderland double speak...well done
Comments from author:
Thanks. I really love that you're having so much fun. This is a joy to write and I can't wait to continue. Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Review By [Christy] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from mendenbar
Review:
Can't wait until all these stray threads come together. I expect they will weave the most marvelous tapestry. (Liam Angel Geraldo IS Angel, yes?)
Comments from author:
Why, yes, he is. I'm so glad you're enjoying this. I'm really enjoying writing it. I included the 'Geraldo' part because it's the Cheshire Cat and he really doesn't care that's not REALLY Angel's name, which is part of the point. Hee.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of a Fraud" from DemonChyld
Review:
Ooh! I like this one! Delightfully weird and wonderful and the Cheshire Cat steals the show! Xander was a bit harsh, poor boy doesn't remember at all, but hopefully Luna and Harry can help him get better.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I'm really loving writing it. I can't ignore an idea and this one's been particularly fun. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Review By [DemonChyld] • Date [8 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: Upside Down and Inside Out" from mendenbar
Review:
I don't know. This will either be truly fabulous (or is that frabjulous?) or a real stinker. I'm holding out for fabulous.
Comments from author:
...I'm hoping for fabulous, myself. Working it out right now. Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [8 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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