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Review of chapter "Part 13" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
please, please continue this.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13" from newbiepeanut
Review:
more, Please!
Review By [newbiepeanut] • Date [16 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story, and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 13" from Almadynis
Review:
Very interesting, and thanks muchly for the update!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 13" from silvergaurd
Review:
hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 13" from musumenosuoh
Review:
cool. will beta if you need me.
Review By [musumenosuoh] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
nice to see this again.


as always keep up the good work
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I am very glad to see more of this wonderful story. I hope things get better for you.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13" from msdarque
Review:
Interesting, informative chapter. I liked it.
I think SoundBlast is the cutest sparkling. :D
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 13" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Joy! U have updated. I'm sorry about your brother. And I hope your mothwr is doing better.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13" from purrfus
Review:
I typically avoid Transformer stories; they are one of those things I really think work better in a visual media, but when this popped up today something made me stop and read.

Sweet and fun. I'm going to set tracking because I hope to see more.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [2 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from ultor
Review:
Bluestreak freaking out about being a big brother is so sweet. Its an awsome story i cant wait for the next chapter.
Review By [ultor] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from Faeri
Review:
Ch.12 was awesome, I can't wait for the next parts to come out.

I hope you're able to update soon!
Review By [Faeri] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from ICE
Review:
Is there going to be any more of this story? I enjoyed it so much and it saddens me that it hasn't been updated in months.
Comments from author:
I have been working on the next two parts. However, I had to focus on school. Then my brother died unexpectedly in August and I didn't feel like writing. I'm hoping to have the next part within the next couple months.
Review By [ICE] • Date [17 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
I like this more than I thought I would. I'll admit I'm equal parts bothered and not that Xander doesn't remember anything. On one hand, him not having access to his old memories means that Prowl and Jazz actually get to raise a sparkling and not a human adult in bot form. On the other hand, I'll always miss Xander. Though I have hopes that in the future (far, far off future...) he'll be able to remember more. It took me a bit to realize who the Decepticon parent was. Everybody is saying Soundwave, but, really, it was Frenzy he ran into. I'd think the cassettes have more from their 'parent' than a normal sparkling, but still. Though I suppose it might still be Soundwave because as far as I know none of the cassettes have the mind reading ability. Can't wait for the bots to figure out that's what's happening. I thought it was just some of Xander's old perceptiveness bleeding through, but the second time it happened... I'd like to see more of the White's soon as well, if not lease so that they could explain more about what Xander was like, so he's not forgotten. Hope there's an update before too long
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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