I typically avoid Transformer stories; they are one of those things I really think work better in a visual media, but when this popped up today something made me stop and read.
Sweet and fun. I'm going to set tracking because I hope to see more.
Is there going to be any more of this story? I enjoyed it so much and it saddens me that it hasn't been updated in months.
Comments from author:
I have been working on the next two parts. However, I had to focus on school. Then my brother died unexpectedly in August and I didn't feel like writing. I'm hoping to have the next part within the next couple months.
I like this more than I thought I would. I'll admit I'm equal parts bothered and not that Xander doesn't remember anything. On one hand, him not having access to his old memories means that Prowl and Jazz actually get to raise a sparkling and not a human adult in bot form. On the other hand, I'll always miss Xander. Though I have hopes that in the future (far, far off future...) he'll be able to remember more. It took me a bit to realize who the Decepticon parent was. Everybody is saying Soundwave, but, really, it was Frenzy he ran into. I'd think the cassettes have more from their 'parent' than a normal sparkling, but still. Though I suppose it might still be Soundwave because as far as I know none of the cassettes have the mind reading ability. Can't wait for the bots to figure out that's what's happening. I thought it was just some of Xander's old perceptiveness bleeding through, but the second time it happened... I'd like to see more of the White's soon as well, if not lease so that they could explain more about what Xander was like, so he's not forgotten. Hope there's an update before too long
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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