This is a very fun story! I love that you actually had the BuffyBot evolve, and that she has found a new mission in her new world. Thanks for sharing - kudos!
Review By [Tammims] • Date [22 May 11] • Not Rated
I love the idea of mini!Jack having the comfort of Buffybot in big-sister mode, to make his high school existence a little easier.
If you're ever tempted to write a sequel, I'd like to pre-register my vote in favor: more clone!Jack and Buffybot would be most welcome.
Comments from author:
I'm seriously considering sending them on a raid of a Trust warehouse... alas, I want to finish up 'Roar a Giant Roar' before beginning that enterprise.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Finally Jack gets to be the brains of an outfit! Now that her Dawn-programming has activated and he doesn't have to worry about being slayed all that is left to worry about is if she becomes overprotective, or starts being attracted to older men- especially cold ones. Hey didn't Old!Jack spend some time in Antarctica?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
What a clever and different story idea! I like the thought of Buffy bot and mini Jack banding together. The buffy bot had some interesting dimensions to her. This story could even be continued. (hint hint)
Darn it! I love Buffybot and I love Mini-Jack. For both to be in the same story just boggles my mind with delight. But your story is a bit short. I would love *hint, hint* to read more of their adventures. Especially if M-J gets Sam involved with upgrading Buffybot, without turning her/it in to SGC of course. Won't M-J be thrilled if Sam activates Buffybot's sex subroutines? Lol! I wonder if Spike had Warren install both heterosexual and homosexual subroutines? That way both M-J and Sam might get a delightful surprise. Lol!
Comments from author:
I don't know if Warren put in protocols against incest, but if he didn't... Buffy might find herself in a situation where she needs to 'comfort' Mini-Jack. Heh. Old Jack might get jealous.
O-J: What are you doing?! M-J: What's it look like? O-J: Robb'n the cradle. M-J: She's a robot. She never had a cradle. O-J: So we're having sex with a machine now? *Shrug* M-J: Women do it all the time. Just think of her as a vibrator for guys. A really big, advanced, pretty, AWESOME vibrator. O-J:...you have a point. Dammit.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Poor neglected Buffybot needs more stories! (Not to mention miniJack). This could be a fun dynamic duo if you continue it.
Comments from author:
I completely agree. She is so unloved and unappreciated! I'm toying with the idea of a sequel that brings Cassandra into the group. A slayer needs her scoobies!
Review By [Caminus] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]