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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Silver
Review:
Can't give this a 10 as it has not been updated in a very long time. I have re-read this & I'm glad I did; I forgot how good it was. Loki teaming up with the First could be very nasty! Of course, I would expect Loki to have his own plans. Unfortunately, it seems as this has been abandoned - or put aside - because there have been no updates. I read in a reply to another review that Muse doesn't know what to do with this. I hope sometime you can back to this; it has so much potential!! I will no longer keep this on my tracking list; as it is unlikely to be updated soon with Muse losing interest. Thanks for the good read & hope to see more of this someday.
Review By [Silver] • Date [11 Aug 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadowman
Review:
A good start I really hope you get your muse back for this story soon.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [8 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
please could you put some energy in this story and update.
I so want to see the faces from the Scoobies when they see what's happening and Buffy replaced them with others that fast.

So could you please update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
You seriously need to continue this story. Like, ASAP. Please? Anyhow, it's good and I'd love to see more.

CT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne
Review:
Is this fic abandoned?
Comments from author:
muse refuses to do anything with this I have about 1/4 of a chapter but can't think of what else to write. I don't want to ignore it but at the same time I don't know what else to do either.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
don't forget to update this one
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from inkling
Review:
This is great! I really hope you continue it.
Review By [inkling] • Date [11 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valkyrie
Review:
Are you going to continue this?
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [9 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
Good start hope you'll update soon.
And for the readers who can't stand the bashing Scooby part. Remember kicking somebody from her own house while it's dangerous outside. That's sending somebody to her dead. Pulling somebody from heaven is selfish. Everybody is aloud to make mistakes but apparently not Buffy. hypocrite much
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ktweaver
Review:
this is AWSOME!!! I hope you pick it up again sometime. only the beginning and I'm super excited!
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [18 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DearestDrusilla
Review:
I like this! Omg, I was doubtful at first but then I started reading and it was great!
Review By [DearestDrusilla] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkwoofe
Review:
I love it when Buffy gets some real help after getting thrown out. Nothing against the Scoobs, but I've seen far too many fics where Buffy has to be the one to swallow her pride and goes back to them with her tail between her legs. And somehow or another Xander ends up being the super powered hero...WTF right? I love the guy, but after reading so many stories like that with the bashing of Buffy most often, and the others often enough I'm starting to hate seeing anything with him even mentioned.

Anyway, great story as usual. I'm looking forward to the next chapter as well as future updates of some of your other stories. Thanks for the entertaining distraction from RL...
Review By [darkwoofe] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KingOfCretins
Review:
Not bad.

Unfortunately it’s another bash the scoobies for kicking Buffy out fic. There are so many of them out there and they all completely ignore that Buffy's plan to take the potentials back to the vineyard was as smart as the World War 1 tactic of getting out of the trenches and walking slowly toward the enemy.
Buffy may have been right about the value of the vineyard but her idea of what to do about it was wrong and she failed to recognise this and ask for alternatives instead she stupidly insisted that her plan was the only thing to do and was unwilling to hear otherwise. The potentials and especially the scoobies were just as stupid in their reactions which ultimately lead to Buffy getting kicked out.

Allot of stupid decisions were made by both sides but most authors who take Buffy’s side on this issue never acknowledge this I hope that with having tactically smart characters like Captain America and Nick Fury in this you’ll take more of a middle ground when they finally encounter the scoobies. Also keep in mind that the scoobies (including Buffy by the way) are good people who are working for the side of good but have at various points have made bad decisions just like the Ultimates in fact; so try not to hammer them to much.

This is not a criticism of you and this fic by the way in fact I think this is one of the best of this type but I felt I had to make a few observations.
Keep writing, cant wait for more.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dapsy
Review:
Hey there,

I like what you got so far... and in her case, unlike what happened in the series, it actually would make sense to get some external help. I am looking forward to reading more of this story, am rather curious of where you will take it.


I just hope she will get her axe soon and I will be happy.
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Sigh. This could have gone somewhere. But like your typical Xander-Stu or Buffy-Sue story, the only place they go is at least low-grade Scooby bashing. Ah, well. Next.

It would be nice if the Buffy-Sue writers would stop basing their opinion of the entire series on that one deplorable S7 episode, but I digress...
Comments from author:
If its so horrible write your own version and stop whining.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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