Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kindleflame
Good story! The only thing I didn't like was how Buffy was still treating Dawn as a child. I mean she is 21 years old for Pete's sake. An adult! Buffy needs to back off and let Dawn live her own life. Enough said.
Review By [Kindleflame
] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cutiepie
I don't see what the big deal is. Willow only pulled the "Jewish" card when she was wanting to be difficult about something or avoid something that she didn't enjoy. Plus, didn't she pretty much renounce Judaism for paganism by the end there? Besides, her loving "Charlie Brown Christmas" was a big running thing throughout the series. Still, a fun and entertaining story. Thanks for writing.
Review By [Cutiepie
] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated