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The Long Walk

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Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from GypsyDruid
Review:
This is good. I'm really liking the direction you're going. Hope you come back soon.
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice fic. Really nice, I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Gideon
Review:
Cool idea. 25000 years is a bit longer than I was expecting! I was thinking maybe 5 years, ten if you wanted to make it really long! Your writing is good, feels a bit rushed perhaps but you probably need to rush a bit if you are going to get through such a long period!
I'm not really familiar with Bioshock at all so I assume it would be a little easier to see how Buffy knows all these things if I had played the game. She seems to be very well informed! (as well as very smart and well educated). And now she has various powerful psychic abilities as well as her slayer powers I don't know why she needs to visit anywhere else - she is already very powerful!
If you wanted to make your disclaimer a bit shorter you could make each 'world' a separate story and make it a series instead of one big story. Good luck!
Comments from author:
the abilities aren't psychic. The ADAM from the game combines with human cells and over-writes them as sort of benign cancer cells, but they heal and ressurect dead and hurt cells too. The plasmids are a refined form that use EVE to power them and they just channel different abilities through the body. It's not psychic, its genetic. Your better of looking at the wiki for an explanation.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter(s). 111/100
Review By [Doodle] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Iceflame
Review:
Still looking good. I'd add the full disclaimers to at least the first three chapters, then a single sentence above the rest, basically saying 'I own nothing, these shows/games/etc. are the properties of their respective creators'. Just to be on the safe side
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapters.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [21 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter.

What's she doing though?
Review By [Doodle] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
I have no idea where you're going with this but it is interesting. You could use a beta to catch your spelling errors.
I'm not at all familiar with the cross over so Buffy's time in Rapture is rather confusing but I'm still intrigued.
I hope you resolve the problem with the site moderators so you can continue this story.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [19 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from dAz
Review:
good!, looking forward for more
Review By [dAz] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Things don't look good for Buffy, but for you fic, it's awesome! Really enjoying it.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue. A Choice" from DemonicAngelC
Review:
This story shows some promise. I'm looking foward to seeing what you come up with.
Comments from author:
Bioshock,Stargate(Ancients, not modern day),Highlander and AB, then back to Buffyverse(Shes Mary Sue by this point so still no idea what enemies she'll fight)
Review By [DemonicAngelC] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue. A Choice" from WhiteWolf
Review:
25,000 years!

Oh, Whistler is so going to get his ass kicked if Buffy hasn't forgotten about it.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue. A Choice" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [14 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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