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Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Letomo
Review:
Huh. I can't place the bar in Chicago he might be going to. If it was a pub, that would be the one from Harry Dresden, but otherwise, I'm not placing it.

Otherwise, this felt like a good start, so I'm sorry to see it marked as complete.
Comments from author:
The bar is McGinty's from the show Early Edition. I had a thought to cross that with BTVS but I could never quite get there and this was the result. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Fayari
Review:
I like your story. I sincerely dislike the pairing, because Buffy's decisions and actions since the third season (with exception of the fifth) definitely sullied her in my eyes. But the story was nice.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Zaxxon
Review:
Interesting....

This could work into a prologue for something... the possibilities are endless.


Seems a shame to just leave it here, but where to jump to....
Review By [Zaxxon] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Mordare
Review:
Wow this one has a really great start. Hope you decide to get back to it some day.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Nice. That was great. And I think Angel would have had kittens if he knew Xander had his car now. LMAO But this was good. And Lorne! Woot!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written opening for a series of fun scenes from Xander's vacation.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from bucksavage
Review:
THE END? What? No! This can't be the end, it feels more like a beginning a a good story....GREAT WORK!
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [17 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Gideon
Review:
Sounds like a fresh start is just what Xander needs. I hope he finds what he is looking for in Chicago (or maybe when he gets back to Cleveland to see Buffy :))
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from nitsuJ
Review:
It's cool enough, witty and humerous writing etc. But somehow it doesn't feel finished. With whatever wacky adventures Chicago shall entail :)
Review By [nitsuJ] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from yrfgd
Review:
The stats say that this is a one-shot and is finished, yet the story leaves so much hanging and has a real ability to be expanded.

So, is this really the end or are you just teasing us?
Comments from author:
Let's say that this is the end of this particular story. There is a definite possibility that I will revisit this verse at a later date, but so far I've written nothing. Thanks for the review.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [16 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from AlexiDrake
Review:
But it can not be done it needs more. Sorry for the wine, but this is the beginning of a really good story.

Alexi
Review By [AlexiDrake] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from banner
Review:
As always, you show such *depth* to the characters. I love seeing what you do every time. It's an interesting idea, with lots of possibilities.
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Greywizard
Review:
I would be absolutely delighted to see you expand this and make it a much longer story, but it's quite enjoyable as it is.

It did seem a little bit rushed, but not overly so.

Very nice.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beyond Surviving" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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