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Review of chapter "A New Team: Faith, Magneto and Stargate" from Zeviz
Review:
This would be an interesting story to see more of.
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [31 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Naruto Uzumaki and the Deus Ex Machina no Jutsu" from SnidelyWhiplash
Review:
I think I love you. Please continue this in some form.
Review By [SnidelyWhiplash] • Date [6 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from DianeCastle
Review:
Chapter 13 was the funniest, but chapter 12's *title* all by itself cracked me up.

I think an AC/HP/Indy crossover would be awesome. But I keep imagining Jessica Nigri cosplaying as AC characters (as she already does) and Harry seeing her at a comic con and freaking.
Review By [DianeCastle] • Date [13 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Corleone" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Loved the final scene!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "GROW A SPINE DAMNIT! or A Pink Halloween" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I actually enjoyed that and normally I don't like Sakura at all.
Comments from author:
I really think she was a character who has a lot more potential than she's normally given. I like her and I don't, but it worked for this one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "E chu ta, Solo!" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
I think Ron would be a better chewie than Ginny, who would actually make a pretty good Mara Jade as one of the other reviewers said. As for Lando I could easily see the twins sharing that role as they are already known for smuggling in the food and drinks that get shared at gryfindor parties. I would love to see more of this hope that the muse finds you and inspires you to continue it sometime in the future.
Comments from author:
I was really just going with the "Life Debt" thing since both Ginny and Chewie had them. But to each their own.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I was thinking of "Tomb Raider: Legend", the Scion of Atlantis (First Civilization = Atlantis)and the birthing chambers seem to be just the thing for this (After all, humans had to come from somewhere).
Comments from author:
I haven't played any Tomb Raider since the first game and I've only seen the first movie. While people are welcome to do a cross on their own, I don't do crosses with series I don't know well and enjoy.

Thanks for reading!
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from Chikageko
Review:
Damn... Well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from DarthBill
Review:
I really enjoyed this oneshot. Hope you continue it at some point.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I might. Any of them are possible to be brought back if I get the inspiration.
Review By [DarthBill] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from gamebrain
Review:
I absolutely love this idea. I promise, if you continue it, I will read, and review. There's alot to explore in such a universe. The Assassin's possible magical connection/presence, ect. I just have an image of an Assassin seeing Harry running around in his Ezio robes and taking notice. Doesn't even have to be Desmond or Lucy. It could be someone completely different. Though Harry running into Lucy and finding out she's an Assassin could be entertaining.
Comments from author:
Well, Harry wouldn't wear the robes outside of magical Britain, which would prevent that for the most part. Unless a battle spilled over, then it might happen. A Lucy/Assassin Harry meeting would be interesting, especially if she recognized him, considering she thinks he's dead.

I saw magic as just another thing to come from "Those Who Came Before." Just a different list of abilities and genetic quirks.

Although, imagine Abstergo encountering the Forbidden Forest? Intelligent spiders, centaurs and an adolescent giant? That might be interesting.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [gamebrain] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I like the concept of this fusion universe, as well, especially as Harry might have been onto something when he made the plausible denial for the nurse.

I can easily see magic as having been a third corner of the Legacies of Those Who Came Before, the traditions of magic being ways to make the old workings of the world workable to some extent. Much as the Templar conceal themselves in authority and the Assassins live by the Creed, the Statute of Secrecy becomes a much more understandable reflex.

I daresay that Harry would have to have a long talk with Dumbledore about his foolishness; not the Headmaster's placing him with the Dursleys so much as his lack of adding non-violence wards and wards to defend against Muggle invasion. (Dudley, in particular, would feel VERY bitter about the lack of the latter..) I have to add that having them taken for reasons having to do with the Dursley bloodline (Aunt Petunia possibly still alive?) should fairly well blow Albus' mind.

Putting certain traumas of Dumbledore's into focus via the Creed, it's pretty clear that Albus learned exactly the wrong lesson from the tragic death of his sister Arianna. Trying to save the irredeemable does nothing to address the actual sin, as Arianna's death was a classic example of the importance of the First Tenet. (Stay thy blade from the flesh of an innocent)

If and when Harry finally gets a hold of a Pensieve, I daresay truly organizing his mind will make him the deadliest Assassin to ever live, not least if the dreams and memories reveal the powers of the Potters, Blacks, Gaunts, and quite possibly the Peverells. It will also give him a resource pool in which to literally immerse future trainees.
Comments from author:
You are absolutely right, Dumbledore doesn't follow the creed. His bungling of the Dursley situation would come up quickly. I have vague visions of Dudley decking the old man. Dumbledore's handwavium of "wisdom" won't go over well with a Dudley/Indy composite.

Aunt Petunia is dead as is Vernon. And lets throw Marge into the grave as well just for fun.

Harry would need to get his house in order first. Only then would he be able to expand beyond the wizarding world. I have ideas spanning from Draco getting one warning that he's still an innocent, but as soon as the mark goes on, he's fair game. Harry turning the DA into Assassins would be another interesting aspect to delve into.

Dudley won't, however, get the images from all his ancestors, only those he'd met through the Animus. James, Lily, Tom, Ezio, and Altaiir and the Roman/Gallish assassin/wizard ancestor.

The more feed back I get on this the more I want to return to it. There are still plenty of ideas to go with it, I'm just a bit busy with other ideas at the moment.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from Cateagle
Review:
I most certainly hope you do return to this one. You've set up a fascinating crossover and the potential for several interweavings is considerable and promising of considerable story-telling.
Comments from author:
I probably will return to a number of them. This one I still have idea for, just too many ideas. I have a lot on my plate right now, but maybe in the future.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Cateagle] • Date [28 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from JediKnight
Review:
I liked the idea, but I basically sucked at "Assassin's Creed" and so never knew if I liked it enough to read fics on it.
Comments from author:
It has a good storyline, but the gameplay isn't everyone's cup of tea. I liked it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "E chu ta, Solo!" from dcarson
Review:
“I don't care!” Hermione said again as she gave him the Look™. “You are not turning Ginny Weasley into a Wookie!”

"How about a Ewok, she's the right size for an Ewok?" ask Harry

thoughtful pause, "No not a Ewok either"
Comments from author:
That could work, but I'm still much more partial to Ginny the Wookie. I have a scene in mind where Hermione discovers that Ginny WAS turned into a wookie and Harry protests that it isn't his fault because someone else did it for him.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [dcarson] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry's Creed" from Avaiaal
Review:
some great ideas here, highly amusing ones.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Avaiaal] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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