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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Markelo
Review:
LOL Xander's reaction to Revan's in his/her mind is too funny!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FemXanderForever
Review:
Definitely one of the better Star Wars themed crossovers (if only because I find the Xander getting a Gender Bender to be oddly fitting) that I've seen out there.

Now, onto the next part:

FYI, it has been noted that, even as a Jedi, Revan was an adept user of the Dark Side of the Force, and when a Sith, was an adept Light Side user, or, to put it simply, Revan was a Grey Jedi.

Unlike most people, who sensationalise Revan as being some strictly Sith or Jedi persona, Revan was actually the first Sith Lord to actually be working to save the Republic, instead of destroying it. This goes to show that his/her passion, his/her ... thirst for power, wasn't driven just by the pure desire for it, as s/he was mentioned to have seen something in the Unknown Regions in the Sith Lords sequel, and the explanation of his/her desires for the Jedi to become more active in the war was realised too late, betrayed by Malak who was the actual one who ravaged the Republic and all but decimated it.


Also, I'd like to point out that the whole Sith Lords sequel takes place about three to four years after KotOR, and goes on for the span of about a year to a year and a half, and Revan had gone to the Unknown Region of space to seek out what s/he had found, to combat the True Sith. It is also noted, in cannon (if that is what you are going with), that the Exile joined up with Revan about four to five years after that (roughly), and after that, it is pretty blank.

The key point, though, is that Revan knew a lot of advanced and powerful techniques, some of which were all but forgotten, like being able to destabilise molecules in walls and such to pass through them, flight (of a limited capacity), the Shatterpoint (which, according to cannon, was discovered about a thousand years prior to his being able to use it), and was a master Lightning user, not unlike that of Starkiller (only much better) from the games. You also have to be aware that Revan is a prodigal genius and a hard worker, so s/he was extremely smart.

Revan was actually promoted to Knighthood at around fifteen years of age, and went off to war around the age of seventeen or eighteen, and the war lasted, in cannon, about four to ten years, in which Malachor V was blown up by the Shadow Device (I think is what it was called, anyway). Don't forget that the Mandalorian wars were supposed to be brutal, and entire worlds were massacred, and s/he was on the front lines, so Revan got a first hand view and feeling of the ravages of war from a Force users point of view.

Hope this little blurb of information was a little bit of help, and if you need more, just ask me for more, lol.

Okay, hope you keep it up and update soon,
FemXanderForever.
Comments from author:
O.O........*hands you a box of cookies*

HOLY MOLY, I've been researching as much info on Revan as possible, but I think you gave me more information in this one review than I've found in days of research. Thankyou SO much!! I'll definitely contact you if I have any questions, because I dont know much outside of KOTOR and KOTOR 2 game canon.
Review By [FemXanderForever] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Orchamus
Review:
Awesome, more please!!
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from darkplayer
Review:
Awesome start to the story. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. Is there going to be more crossovers or is this it? Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
Even when he gets a bit of luck it is in equal measures good and bad.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from msdarque
Review:
Oooh, this is fantastic! Cannot wait to read more. This has SO much promise. :D
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Raider
Review:
nice, very nice.

more please?
Review By [Raider] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Riniko
Review:
Xander may have to look on the bright side here, at the very least Revan can kick the last traces of the hyena out of their body. That still leaves him now female and with someone in his head, but now Xander can play a great game of Star Wars Monopoly by herself.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from DarthPayne
Review:
Huh, i notice that at the end of the chapter Xander is already referring to himself as 'her'.

I don't see how a teenage male would make a change like that in only a few seconds.
Comments from author:
Ah! I'm glad you caught that, I didnt mean for that to happen. My coworkers kept distracting me while I was trying to finish typing this up. Thanks for the catch.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from michaelangelo
Review:
I really like the idea of this, but despite the fact it's a gender bender I'd still classify it as slash. As such, I'd issue you with a tin hat and point you toward a trench with the words "Keep your head down". Personally I think Spike is effin awesome, but they went and ruined him by turning him into a creepy stalker. Spike and Xander as friends would be damn awesome as long as there was no Buffy relationships involved, but as a couple? it just isn't believable. Xander has a mad on for vampires that's shown all through the series even if he did find Angel attractive :).

If I had any suggestion it would be not to bother with relationships or just make it a Hetero because sexuality is more of a state of mind than dangley bits you have.
Comments from author:
I have no absolute plans for relationships, I'm just letting them end up as they end up. *pulls on her combat helmet and grins* There's a disturbance in the Force, it tells me that Spander and Xangel pairings are not well liked.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Technically, Revan is canonically male, although the game does allow the player to choose his gender. This affects who the character can fall in love with.

I can't see Xander with Spike.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Revan
Comments from author:
I'm aware that Revan is a male in canon, but I'm using the ability to choose in the game to attract Janus, who represents the division between two opposites. I'm afraid I'm a Spander shipper, so that's typically how I write.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne
Review:
Sor far, so good.

Not sure i like the Spander part though, hopefully that won't happen.

Perhaps a Xaith, Cander or Xenny pairing instead?

You don't see many of them in fics like this one.
Comments from author:
May not be spander, but Xan will most likely be paired with a male character. I'm contemplating the whole Revan/Carth relationship...she seems to be into broody guys if you catch my drift.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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