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Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
come on. or are you waiting until the real summer lull to continue this? (lol)
I could see Wynn and Morrigan showing Willow real magic and smacking her down at her belief that she was good with magic.
not to mention Anya. a female rumble there.

Oghren vs the Alibi Room is like a running every other day occurance.
Buffy needs to be put in her place by both Morrigan and Leliana.

in other words PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [4 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from deamon
Review:
you know I just love your stories I have almost everyone tracked lol. I would love to see either a one shot or (more preferably lol) an actual story with xander in the final fantasy 7 or 9 and above games lol. I personally vote for 9, 10, and 13
Review By [deamon] • Date [18 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from IcemanII
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Very interesting series. Keep up the good work, and hope to see more.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [14 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Chapter 1

interesting start, but I hope you explain how X ended up in Fereldan in the 1st place.


2. Chapter Two - The Return... Wait who're you?

good choice going to G-Man first and good to know how X landed there. Now only why :)


3. Chapter Three - How the Hell!?

now the rest is in SD as well? ohaa that will be fun....

4. Chapter Four - Is This Excitement or Tension?


the group took the new world very well so far and now the fun starts :)

5. Chapter 5 - Adjustments

Buffy mistaken as a dwarf...rofl.....
Comments from author:
Well I'm glad you like it ^^! Now I just have to figure out what the heck I want to do with it...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from Orchamus
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Definitely worth the read, I can't wait for more. You would think this cross would be done more often, but sadly non. A pity he isn't with Morrigan if only because Leliana is done most of the time when this cross is done at all.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [22 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from Hanzo
Review:
♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from trongod
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I'm wondering why a Bard is so up tight about sharing her man with another woman that he is so obviously close to? Is it that they are still in the initial lovey dovey part of the relationship or what?

Now that they are in SunnyHell, seems that she might think that anything that helped keep Xander and themselves alive and well would bee a good thing. Binding her "rival" closer to Xander and thereby the rest of them would be sensible... Besides, she might even enjoy it!!

President of the Xander Needs And Requires A Harem In All Realities Fan Club And Marching/Drinking Society
Review By [trongod] • Date [7 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from Stormguard
Review:
I like it so far.
I am curious as to how Morrigan and Wynne will use magic now that they're beyond the fade.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter :)
Review By [Stormguard] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from darkbear
Review:
i like it is something different(crossover w/something i have never seen before) keep it up.
Review By [darkbear] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from lillyb
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Good job, very well planed. Your writing is very rich and the flow is great. The little things are what make a story great, so many writers either just gloss over them or blow them out of proportion, to quote a famous blond this one is juuuussst right.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from Blackguard
Review:
Great chapter, I really loved Leliana's introspection at the end. I am really looking forward to how future interactions among the group will go.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - Adjustments" from Blackguard
Review:
Great chapter, I really loved Leliana's introspection at the end. I am really looking forward to how future interactions among the group will go.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four - Is This Excitement or Tension?" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
EEP! Good luck Xander...you're gonna need it. lmao
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four - Is This Excitement or Tension?" from Blackguard
Review:
More, soon, please!!

Great story thus far, loving the Xander/Leiliana pairing and greatly looking forward to the upcoming interaction between the 4 girls. I am also looking forward to Giles and Wynne interacting, I get the feeling the two of them could get along with each other very easily.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four - Is This Excitement or Tension?" from (Current Donor)Vipomus
Review:
Love it the crossover. Nice writing. Hope you do some more flashback just to get to know the circumstances of Ferelden.

The last was EVIL...

Thx for written.

Vipe
Review By [(Current Donor)Vipomus] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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