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Review of chapter "What makes a Goodbye" from Kalliza
Review:
This story is awesome. I hope you update again soon!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Goodbye" from WomanofLetters
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Although it was difficult to follow at first, with the jumping around in time at the beginning of this story, I really love your vision of Faith as a Winchester and Dean as the healer of souls -- first Faith, then Angel, and now (hopefully) Dana. I'd love to see where this is going. Hope you're planning on updating soon.
Review By [WomanofLetters] • Date [29 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Goodbye" from Christy
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Love this story so far...recently got interested in Supernatural and found your story...so awesome- can't wait for more.
Review By [Christy] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a Goodbye" from greeniron
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That was a nice round up to Angel and Buffy, not leaving them quite so damaged. And I'm really looking forward to Dean coping with Dana.
Review By [greeniron] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes Fear" from greeniron
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I really like this subplot and I'm looking forward to learning what happens next. (And I love "Hairy John"!)
Review By [greeniron] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes an introduction" from greeniron
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This continues to be great. I like how you show Sam's growing frustration and guilt and I'm looking forward to Dana's story.
Review By [greeniron] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Dance" from Kalliza
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Awesome story. I love that you've pulled Dana into it. I also love the synergy between the two sets of tasks: the Slayers are charged to protect Dean, but Dean is there to protect their hearts/minds/souls, or whatever. And you have the beginning of the Angel crew already. Yay! Looking forward to reading more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing- so thrilled that you like it! :)
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [4 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a change of heart" from MarcusSLazarus
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Nice touch with Wesley's brief appearance; should be interesting to see how things go now that Angel's established in Los Angeles at least a few months ahead of schedule (I won't say a year because at least SOME time has passed since he left Sunnydale), to say nothing of how Dana will 'interact' with Faith...
Comments from author:
In my head-timeline, he's about three months, maybe, ahead of canon, so it's not too earth-shattering. And I always loved Wesley, so it's time he was included- after all, I took his Slayer away from him, so I had to have him do something, right? ;)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes Escape" from draconis
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Excellent re-imagining and re-telling of both series.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you. That's nice to hear! Thanks so much for reading, and for commenting! :)
Review By [draconis] • Date [14 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes Escape" from greeniron
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I really liked the meeting with Mary and the sense of connection it gave Faith. I also like how you are handling Dana so far with her mixture of damage and striving for freedom.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you liked it! Dana has a lot of damage and now she has a Slayer side to contend with, so there's going to be some adjusting required. :)
Review By [greeniron] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes Escape" from MarcusSLazarus
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Dean's rescue of Dana might cause some problems later- considering what happened when she got out in the show, I have a feeling that the doctors will be REALLY anxious to get her back, to say nothing of the Watchers wanting a Slayer-, but at least she's drawing on enough of other Slayers to recognise Dean as a friend as opposed to her attacks on Spike in canon.

Plus, of course, the scene with Faith and Mary was excellent, dropping hints about the future without confirming anything; the only thing that could have made it better would have been if Mary made a comment about how she would have loved Faith as a daughter if they'd had a chance to meet in person.

Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
There will definitely be problems. Essentially, he's kidnapped her. They may need to steer clear of California for a while, after this. I always thought that Dana, in-canon, was completely unlucky. If *anyone* else had chased after her but Spike and Angel, she might have not been as completely loop-the-loop from the start. With that said, she still has buckets of stuff to work through, so we'll see how it goes! :)

My first draft of that chapter had Mary saying something similar to Faith, but I just couldn't leave it in. It felt too forced, the way I was writing it, so that's what we got instead. I think, in this universe, it's probably true though: Mary would have loved her like her own, if they'd had the chance.

Thanks so much, as always, for reading and reviewing! Your comments mean a lot! :)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes Imprisonment" from greeniron
Review:
It's great to see the story progressing. I'm really looking forward to Dean's confrontations with Dana and the hunters. Sam's anger in this chapter seemed very in character, though lacking the bitterness he develops later.
Comments from author:
Phew- nice to hear that he's still in-character. That's a relief- I'm not as comfortable with Sam-voice, for whatever reason, so thats lovely. Thanks for r&r! :)
Review By [greeniron] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes Imprisonment" from MarcusSLazarus
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Nice bit of work with Dean's contact with Dana; I DEFINITELY look forward to seeing how the mad Slayer reacts to meeting the Righteous Man...
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it- there was some agonizing over how this should go. Hope you're as satisfied with the coming chapters! :)
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes Forgiveness" from isolda
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I'm so glad to see another chapter of this! I've missed Ellen, so it's nice to see her here. Faith's bet with Dean was hilarious. Poor John.
Comments from author:
HBIC Ellen: should be included in all of the fic, IMO.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Much appreciated. :)
Review By [isolda] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes Forgiveness" from greeniron
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I still love this story! It's great to see another chapter. Also, I like Faith and Dean plotting together.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you! And thanks for sticking with me- I appreciate that. :)

You know, I love the idea of Faith and Dean plotting, too. I used to love the pairing in other fics, but I've really fallen for the sibling relationship with this fic!
Review By [greeniron] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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