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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from Morgomir
Review:
Funny start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I do like the idea of Hermione's American cousins and that perhaps the Addams have a vendetta against Dumbledore and Riddle, both. I could see Harry being the descendant of an Addams, though his mother's side.

The idea of stories with internal continuity lead me to try to take things a little more seriously than just for humor and horror effect.

Because I think that if Wednesday really wanted to kill her brothers she would have already, I think you may be a little over the top - which isn't necessarily bad in a comedic approach to the Addams Family. In terms of "could this really happen in a demented way," then I think it is less likely that they kill that much - although "crime of passion" and a boy who had a crush on Wednesday is conceivably possible.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from Fyrloche
Review:
The Addamses' are very hard to get, but I've read a couple of good ones. If you haven't read 'Alexander Harris and the Shadow Council' by Tenhawk you really need to. He has one of the best characterizations of Wednesday I have read. He posts on his own site at tenhawkpresents.com. He has several other great stories but that one is one of his best. As for your story, you've got a good start going. It will be interesting to see where it goes.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
just read this ch and must say I quite enjoyed it and I hope you continue it. And yes the fainting part is understandable and Hermy not allowed to read her books in summer camp...oh boy must she have been pissed off.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from trongod
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I've always enjoyed the Addams, particularly Wednesday, and when she gets involved in Harry's world it gets better - as long as y'all don't let her kill him or something...
This could be a stellar tale of Hermione's awakening early to the facts that (a) adults and books aren't always right; (b) the aforementioned in (a) can't always be trusted with your safety; and (c) you MUST defend yourself. I'd enjoy seeing Harry and Hermione visit the States for Christmas - the actions of the Addams won't shock Harry too much, as he really has little idea how families celebrate the holiday, while Hermione's perspective would be... interesting - and the learning they could achieve in even that short period would be an eye opener for all involved...
Review By [trongod] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from QOShea
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Actually, considering the first book takes place in '91, she would already have been at Hogwarts by the time of that movie.

But hey, who cares!

Never did get into AFValues, but I love the Addams Family.
Review By [QOShea] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from angeluscado
Review:
I just watched Addams Family Values this morning. I'm a little sad that you killed off Joel, but considering how sick the character was, I'm not entirely surprised.

Anyway, this fic is great, as with all of your other stuff I've read. I can't wait to see where you take it :)
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from Eureka
Review:
May I have some......more PLEASE????
This one is going to be GOOD!!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Two Haunting Minds Meet" from LFW
Review:
Good idea and a nice threat from Wednesday, but it bugs me as to why she thinks she has the right(?) to make her demands of Hermione? Power, yes. Ability to follow through, yes. Hermione can do it yes, but what is Wednesday to Hermione that she should?
I hope that I have been clear because I am curious to more of this fic and maybe the next chapter can explain.
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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