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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RHatch
Review:
I like this!!! You should update....
Review By [RHatch] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Narf
Review:
not bad at all keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from msdarque
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Yay for Xander.... though the girls can be mean without thinking.
Really liked it. :D
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Hanzo
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♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from purrfus
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Nice to see more.

I'm of two minds about a costume. Newly buff Xander in spandex or something similar has visual appeal. On the other hand, what would it be made of, how would it be maintained? Totally disregarding Xander's lack of financial resources still would not leave too many options unless this reality has so many superheroes there is a inexpensive costume kiosk on every other corner?

EDIT: Newly buff Xander in Leather. Its a drool waiting to happen. Soon please.
Comments from author:
As far as a costume goes I was contemplating a red and black combo and not the full bodysuit but something of my own design something in leather perhaps
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from lordamnesia
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Like spiderman obviously. This could be good, keep up the grand work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from maverickcronos
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i like the concept so far. when you put him in a costume it would be nice to see something other then the basic spiderman costume, scarlet spider or anything else would work better with xander's style
Review By [maverickcronos] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ladiciusevol
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Interesting story, I look forward to reading more.
Review By [ladiciusevol] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
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Great idea. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LostDragon
Review:
good start keep it going, just be a little diffrent and don't put Xander in a spidersuit. Have him be open with the scoobies about the powers.
Comments from author:
Nope, there will be a spidey-suit I'm afraid. Also, he probably will be open, just not right away.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
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kick ass keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I like this. The aspecting of the spider, the way his self-image is going to almost certainly influence his capabilities.. I'd imagiune the only reason he hasn't noticed his spider-sense is the latent threat level just being there projects. It's not like he didn't feel that threat knowing abut the Hellmouth in the first place..
Comments from author:
Lol, virtual cookie to you, I was wondering if anyone was going to catch the fact that he wasn't sensing the Hellmouth. I'm totally surprised that I didnt get flamed for leaving out the infamous 'spidey-sense'. Kudos :)
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burn
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You're off to a great start so far! I would caution you on the over use of the cliche 'Deadboy' thing and please, don't do the Hawaiian shirt thing. I think he wore one ONCE. I hope you make this a 'Scooby Gang' story. Buffy and Willow might have imploded as characters in the later seasons but at this point in time they could be a great support system for Xander. Please, don't add any other crossovers. There are plenty of worthy enemies in the 'Buffyverse' for Xander to deal with. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Xan's going to have a multitude of things to call Angel besides Deadboy...the same insult over and over gets boring, but their dislike is going to be there for a while, I'm afraid, you can't get over hating someone just like that. Also, there will be no eye-scarring material in my fanfic....I've seen Hawaiian shirts....they scare me....Buffy and Willow will be a sort of support system for him but there will be an anymosity there leading up to the implosion your talking about...but the Scoobies will all be buddies in the end, promise. Lastly, no other major crossovers....but I was thinking some cameo-ish appearances maybe...we'll leave that as a we'll see.
Review By [burn] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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