Good job gradually building up the repoire between ISWC and NCIS: no instant trust, no total acceptance. The uncomfortable collaboration made the story all the more plausible for me.
This was a great read - I think it might become one of the few stories I reread without having nothing else to do. The ending was excellent, such a neat wrap-up. Thanks for writing, and for posting.
i am one of the ones that does wish it would continue on forever! it is great, ended wonderfully. *hands you scones* thank you for sharing with us. *smiles* lovely!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from dreameralways
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That was a fun story and I thank you for writing it.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
WOOOOHOOOO! YAY Frak! *happy dance* That's awesome. He deserves it. He's a cutie. LOL But this was great. I loved this and am sad to see it end but hey they gotta end sometime. I loved the ride tho. Thanks for bringing me with.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Thewander
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awww its the end? great job. keep up the good work.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]