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Review of chapter "Run?" from Silver
I had to review to say that I really enjoyed this. I only gave it an 8 because it has not been updated in nearly 3 years! I did have one of your other stories - Three - on my tracking list, but I removed it because that one had not been updated since 2009. Are you still writing? Are you posting on another site? I'd love to see this one continued; there is so much potential.
Review By [Silver] • Date [15 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Run?" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Great story so far!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [28 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Run?" from SariLane
I really liked this story. I want you to come back to it.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from BerserkerNW
This was so fun! Thank you for sharing! (and I did the same thing upon discovering "Childhood Lost", so you're not alone in the amused embarrassment) I love how Xander forgets to edit some things, but they're so outlandish - or can be confused with a turn of phrase even if he meant it literally - that everyone just seems to go with it. The interaction between Xander and Ezra is fun (as he's my favorite of the seven, I have to admit I'd like to see more of that), and Josiah picking up on little things that even Vin and Chris miss is great. Oh, and Buck catching Xander and Ezra both pulling on their 'faces'. Wonderful! I look forward to your next chapter!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [22 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from ultor
this is a great story i would love to see it updated
Review By [ultor] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from kaleecat
This is a lovely story & I really like that Xander is vin's brother as I haven't seen that before. I really like the plans the team have for getting Xander to stay. I hope you continue it some day.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from Netchka
This is a very cool story. Xanman and Vin as brothers is a nifty idea. Can't wait to read more. Soon please. I hope your muse is well fed and working hard. :-) :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Run?" from thewrongalice
Thanks - this is actually the first Magnificent Seven fic I read (discovered it a couple of days ago) - the characters are great, love the ATF 'verse & can't wait for more :-)
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [21 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Run?" from mountainelements
I'm glad that you just had more bonding in this chapter with a hint of the drama coming. You had many great lines, such as "Xander was simply trying to figure out if he needed to hide his cookies from Buck, the man looked like a cookie-stealer." Thanks for the update!
Comments from author:
Thanks ! And he IS a cookie stealer!! ^_^
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from (Past Donor)HiltonK
I'm liking this story. Your Xander/Team interactions are great.
More soon please.
Comments from author:
Thanks! ^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)HiltonK] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
I really like how Xander and Vin are so similar even if they look so different. This is a wonderful story so far and I look forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from RevDorothyL
Very enjoyable!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from msdarque
Intriguing, fun story... loved reading it!
I think Vin and Xander being brothers is a wonderful idea.
Eager for some more. Congrats!

PS I made the same mistake when searching for more of the Magnificent Seven.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And, oh man! Was I disappointed that the ATF universe wasn't on dvd anywhere. I was despondent for like, an entire day, I swear!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Run?" from (Recent Donor)MissCope
I'm enjoying your characterization of everyone. Good call to go with building the relationship instead of a hold-up or other cliche during the shopping, as I feel it really improves the pacing of the story, and lets you build an interesting plotline and relationships between the characters. I frequently end up frustrated and disappointed with writers who think that by chapter 3 they have to pull in the army, and the President on speed-dial, and a tribe of demons, and lets throw in a megalomaniac mad scientist while we're at it........

Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yeah, I have a problem with the whole, "Oh no! It's an emergency but one of the kids pulls something out of their butts to save the day!" thing. I'm glad you agree with me. ^_^.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissCope] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Run?" from berkie
Not surprised Xander gets along with Peso; demonmagnet, obviously familiar with demons, meets demon horse. It was bound to either go completely wrong or completely right :-P Hope you'll show the teams reactions! Both to Xander getting along with Peso and to Peso having braids :-P

You know, I think the only ones who haven't noticed anything is different about Xander by now are Nathan an JD. Even Buck has now noticed he has a mask of some sort.

Love that Xander found a cd from the Dingoes! Is he going to get it autographed by Oz when he gets back? :-P
Thanks for pointing me to the band! I never paid much attention to whose music it was, am now looking it up.

Good call on taking it slow with the questions. Just normal interaction is already raising enough of them ;-)
Hope you'll continue soon!
Comments from author:
Oh! I could just see Xander pulling out the cd cover and being like, "sign please!" big grin, then Willow bopping Oz over the head cause she didn't know. Let's be realistic. If Willow had known, EVERYbody would have.
And yeah, the braids thing isn't over yet. ^_^
Review By [berkie] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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