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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from brightnshiney
Review:
Firstly I thought Faith’s threat was so funny and I wouldn’t put it past her to actually do it.
Also glad that someone talked to Finn about what a giant ****** he is.
Loved the speech between Rachel and Santana.
I agree about Rachel critiquing everyone and writing tips on how they could improve, It seems like something she would do.
Anyway, I loved this story and more would be awesome or another Glee/BTVS crossover because you are a very talented writer.
Review By [brightnshiney] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from brightnshiney
Review:
I totally agree with you on the bullying thing and Mr Schue ignoring it, as well as the show making a total laughing stock out of Rachel. I don’t get how anyone could like Finn, he’s a hypocrite and he’s not even the best male singer in the club.
I loved when I found out that the Glee club will have no instrument and they will have to do with Rachel’s amazing voice as well.
Mr Schue is an ass, trying to cover up his inadequate teaching by blaming Rachel.
Faith is awesome yelling at Schue and Dawn calling Kurt “catsuit boy”. That was too funny.
Review By [brightnshiney] • Date [13 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SariLane
Review:
I would personally love a third chapter... and I am a HUGE Puck/Rachel fan, so if you wanted to do a little Puck/Rachel I wouldn't mind... sorry... but more please.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [19 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Embarr
Review:
Thank goodness someone feels the same way I do! It was good to read a story without Rachel bashing and where there's some justice for her. The latest episode of Glee has really ticked me off. Everything's Rachel's fault, Rachel's a backstabber, Rachel's getting the limelight... It's definitely annoying how no one ever apologizes to her while they're always demanding apologies from her.

Anyway, thanks for the read!
Review By [Embarr] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eepatten
Review:
I love BTVS/Glee crossovers and I think that yours is amazing. I really like the way you've written the characters and meshed the 2 worlds together. You said you weren't happy with the second chapter, but I thought you did a fantastic job and I would love to read more in this series if you continue it.
Review By [eepatten] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MinervaAnnMcGonagall
Review:
this is a very good story, and I would greatly enjoy reading another chapter of it!
Review By [MinervaAnnMcGonagall] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LadyBold
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I do hope that you will consider continuing this story...maybe give some backhistory of Hiram's involvement with the Watchers - their interactions with Rachel - and maybe some romance with Rachel and Puck? I really enjoy the story and want more...just saying...
Review By [LadyBold] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RandomSelection
Review:
Great story! It's about time that somebody is standing up for Rachel and calling all the cretins on their behaviour - frankly, as far as favourism and bullying is concerned, that show is a joke!

And I think you should write a third chapter ... and maybe a lot more ...

RandomSelection
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [30 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from alexceasar
Review:
Love it and totally agree with you!
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ScorpioP
Review:
I liked reading this story for the most part, as (let's be real) the Gleeks are just as horrid toward each other as any of the popular kids. Rachel is far from blameless herself, as other reviews have said, but she takes a lot more guff from the rest of them than she dishes out.

One critique I do have is your implication that the Scoobies are themselves perfect. I remind you of the many ways the team "lost its way" after high school, between Willow's magic addiction, Buffy's self-destructive behavior, Dawn's kleptomania, Xander's bailing on Anya, the group kicking Buffy out of her house toward the end of Season Seven, and so on. If you do write a Chapter Three, I suggest a frank discussion (well, as frank as they can be without mentioning the supernatural) with New Directions about how the Scoobies' own jealousies and "issues" nearly destroyed them. Kind of a "we've been there, and we don't want you to make our mistakes" talk.
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Blackett
Review:
Great chapter. If you have time please write that third one.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kjmorse
Review:
I just read chapter 1 again yesterday & am so glad that you did write another chapter!!

Any chance of more??
Review By [kjmorse] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Spiegel
Review:
I, for myself, was always completely baffled by why so many attractive and interesting people wanted to get with Finn. Not that attractive (I have multiple classmates who are better looking), posessed of neither a dazzling wit nor a charming personality, and generally fairly dull and selfish boy.
I find it much easier to excuse bad behaviour when it's about fear - like so much of Santana's behaviour, or the Sunshine thing. Kurt conned Rachel because he didn't like her and Quin had given him an excuse, Quin was mean because she could be, Tina and Artie and Mercedes mostly seem to ignore her (even though their ignoring of assaults on Rachel is the same thing that allows assaults on them), and Mr Schuester is just an idiot.

(oh, and I just wanted to bring up one of my personal bugbears - the episode where Kurt comes out to Mercedes? The bit where he tells her he's got a crush on Rachel, AND SHE SMASHES THE WINDSCREEN OF HIS CAR IN? That is not a reasonable response! Seriously, what the fuck?)
Review By [Spiegel] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from rivrgrl
Review:
love how the Scoobs are making everyone be accountable for their actions from Figgins to Azimo to Finn.. Figgins is a horrible Principal/Adminstrator Will plays favorites and Finn thinks nothing is his fault. Glad to see Buffy explain the exact problem Rachel had with her bf sleeping with Santana. *that was my big gripe too. Hello Sex Ed is a must in schools surely his not that stupid to remember a little thing called STDs.* Would have loved to see a bit more Ripper but I'll take what I can get..

I was thinking that before she leaves maybe have Rachel offer Puck a place at Cleveland.. I think his someone else that would benefit from being around the scoobs..

also all the recordings and notes for the club should be a real eye opener if half the stuff I think is on there , actually is.
Review By [rivrgrl] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Orion
Review:
As an honest review, I must admit that I wasn't terribly impressed with this one. It was far from bad, but while the first chapter was notably interesting and fun to read, this one was a bit less so. That said, I am still glad to see more of this, and would still be should further chapters be written.

Thanks for writing, and thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I just wanted to thank you for this review. It put into words what it was that was bothering me about this chapter and may encourage me to do a rewrite in order to fix it, maybe cutting a bit of the ranting out and including several of the things that failed to make it in. Thank you, thank you, thank you for your honesty.
JennyAnn
Review By [Orion] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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