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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Just a very belated thought on this...

Given Jack's liking for men in suits, I'd love to see an Captain Jack / Person of Interest story...
Comments from author:
Belated thoughts always welcome.

And oh, I can see the potential. Unfortunately my knowledge of Person of Interest is very limited - I have only seen about 5 minutes all told. But I'm sure someone has written it, somewhere!
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Connor being the leader of the resistance against the Master and using the "Terminator" catch-phrase was just perfect, but even more so was the redemptive quality of Buffy's mission to save the children of the world, no excuses accepted. A lovely, fitting end!
Comments from author:
The Connor thing was hinted at obliquely in the story of 'The Year That Never Was', and I very much enjoyed expanding on it here - Connor's name always struck me as very appropriate for a 'destiny child' (with all the Terminator connotations inherent therein), and I think he'd very much want to use that if a situation like TYTNW arose.

And Buffy... funnily enough her mission was the last thing to come to me, after I'd wrestled with this chapter for months and months, and then suddenly everything fell into place with absolute perfection. (I love it when that happens. And I loved being able to use all the heartbreak for something constructive!)

Thank you lots for reading, and for all your lovely feedback throughout.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
That's a very good way to end it, though I would have loved to see more. Hope you've posted this to Teaspoon, I'm reccing on Calufrax in a few weeks.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, and I'm glad you liked the ending. I wanted to somehow move on from that terrible ending of Coe and try to use it - which is where Buffy's story decided to spring into action. Re. more story, then unfortunately I've run out of canon to build on, and so this has to be the end... (I know there was Miracle Day, but it never really worked for me, plus I have never been able to see a way to work Buffy into it in a meaningful way.)

And yes, I've posted it to the Teaspoon - it'll show up whenever they update. Thank you again for everything.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Oddshot
Review:
I have enjoyed reading both of these most intriguing crossovers between BtVS & Tourchwood Staring Buffy & Capt Jack Harkness as the Immortal and I am hoping the author may write another sequel with their Muse’s help in this series soon .
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your comment! I am very happy that you enjoyed my stories and the final chapter will hopefully be up before too long - I've been working on the final draft!
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [20 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Shaybo
Review:
Wow... Angsty. ;D Loved it.
Comments from author:
Well it follows canon, and canon... kinda ripped everyone's hearts out. Very happy you liked what I did with it! (Last chapter still to come... I am working on it.)
Review By [Shaybo] • Date [12 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from nightshadowlife
Review:
omg I teared up so many times reading this!!!!!
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you so much!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [23 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Sinangeled
Review:
I'm used to this being amusing and generally lighthearted, with the occasional unavoidable-if-you-want-to-keep-your-characters-realistic bit of angst, so the last chapter kind of threw me a little. It was sweet and a little heartbreaking. Beautiful, and I have absolutely no idea what happens next.
Comments from author:
The first two seasons of Torchwood were fun and crack-tastic and angsty and rather marvellous, despite the fluctuations in quality. And then came Children of Earth, which was *amazing*, but stark and mostly like a sucker-punch. It gave me an ending I could work with, but I rather wish it hadn't broken the show so completely... Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and there will only be one more, wrapping everything up. I hope you like it. *crosses fingers*
Review By [Sinangeled] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awww...! So heartbreaking, and so beautiful (and I love that Buffy gives Spike his white picket fence, as well as letting him have his 'man-cave' or 'pseudo-crypt' out in the shed!).
Comments from author:
Thank you. Once Children of Earth had aired, I knew how to end the story, and knew that I needed to give Buffy a happy ending, to balance things out. And the rest just wrote itself...
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Secret Santa" from rfresa
Review:
I've just found your terrific series and really enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for the last part!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! The last 2 chapters are mostly done, they just need... attention. And a fair bit of editing! :)
Review By [rfresa] • Date [12 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: Secret Santa" from Blackett
Review:
Just finished this series in one go...can't wait for more! Love the whey you've captured Jack.....so real.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for your review! I hope all the reading didn't give you a headache though. And oh Jack... I could write him forever. It's like he's sitting in my head, telling me what to write. ;)
Review By [Blackett] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: Secret Santa" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yeah, I still would go off cannon mid season 2. But that's me. Thanks for continuing!
Comments from author:
Heh. No can do, since making it canon compliant was half the point. :) Not that I don't understand, but if I veered off into AU territory, then I honestly have no idea where I'd go - canon provides me with structure, something I'm very fond of. (Not that I have anything against AUs - I have a whole DW 'verse of my own which gets more AU with every passing seasons...)

Anyway, thank you for all your comments, they're muchly appreciated. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting idea for Jack to follow up upon. Also very interesting that he couldn't get to it for almost a year.
Comments from author:
The watch word was very much 'There are always consequences'. As for the year long gap, then it's a combination of factors. Firstly then I think that The Year That Never Was was incredibly traumatic, and Jack quite simply needed a lot of time to process it (esp given the fact that he didn't really have anyone to talk to about it). Buffy's arrival made him think about it again, but it wasn't until the loss of Owen and Tosh that he was truly reminded of how fragile people are, and how easy it is to end up with grief and pain, and this - combined with his trip to Rome, once more wielding the particular power he has as The Immortal - finally pushed him into action. Plus of course he's immortal - in some ways he has forever to get stuff done...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying the plot but would have preferred for you to have saved Tosh and Owen.
Comments from author:
Well I'm sticking to Torchwood canon 100%, so sadly that was impossible... (I miss them too.)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how your plot AU for the Buffy verse helps explain "Captain John" looking so much like Spike.
Comments from author:
It seemed by far the most logical explanation, plus it made use of the shanshu. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool plotting and character moments. Looking forward to a little au-ey goodness from this point.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :) And oh, the AU one is wonderfully crack-tastic. (And rather worryingly plausible too...) ETA: The one set during TGiQ I mean...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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