There's potential here. I'm not sure if Yamamoto would be able to identify their clothing beyond the fact that it was from the living world, however. That paragraph was a necessary evil I suppose, but it was distracting. That said, the Jyuushiro/Willow pairing is an interesting turn. I think they'd work well together.
Review By [Zari] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Iki ga Kiremasu" from Litlakatla
Review:
This seems very promising :) Please continue soon!
Review By [Litlakatla] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
I would suggest Willow and the angry captain,s second.. I forget her name. But she's sort of a kid... so maybe matasu.. the lazy drunk :) Some how I don't think Rugia would work.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Not Rated
