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Review of chapter "Christmas break" from HappyWonKinobi
Review:
This story has been absolutely wonderful! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Christmas break" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
very good story. one of the best I've seen on this site in many years. I've given you an 6 because of spelling and grammar, but the story is very good, the main thing you need to work on is 'painting the picture' a little better. by that I mean do a little more story outside dialog like tell us who's talking
Example: Snape said "we'll discuss it later, Faith". Severus than placed his arm around Faith's shoulder as he lead he from the room.
As you can see I told you who was talking and than what they did.

Another problem is you use of Idioms. I assume that from your writing style you British, try to remember that Faiths from America (to be precise from Boston) and her way of speaking is pretty set. She's not very likely to already be using words like "Bloody, Berk, Prat,or Pillock" shes more likely to say things like 'Crap, Jerk, Asshole, or Dickhead" on the whole this is a great story and I hope you don't take my criticizer as me not liking it. I've given you a Rec and am now tracking this story and looking forward to your next update.

*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [1 Jan 14] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Christmas break" from ChaosLady
Review:
Nice update.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [26 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas break" from Ember
Review:
Yes another update! I almost lost hope for awhile there, great chapter, I love how you had Faith defend Snape. Merry Christmas and thanks for the great update!
Review By [Ember] • Date [25 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Surprise" from spikesplayfulpet
Review:
Just found this story while looking for something else to read. I like it so far and can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [25 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams" from Kenzi
Review:
Your story is amazing! One of my favorites. And a ship I never would have considered (I absolutely love Faith and George). Thank you for writing it. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much!
I had a slight Weasley twins obsession when this idea came to me. :)

I already finished the next couple of chapters, so an update should come pretty soon!
Stay tuned ;-)
Review By [Kenzi] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams" from JinaSolo
Review:
More please!
Comments from author:
Soon! :)
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [24 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams" from ChaosLady
Review:
It's been awhile. Nice hearing from you. Excellent update!
Comments from author:
Yes, lots of work to do,
unfortunately not a lot of time or motivation to write fanfics,
but I'm back again :)
Hoping to stay a little longer!
Thanks!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vulnerable" from Oddshot
Review:
Only just found this story so I will be part of my XMAS reading this year.

Yours Oddshot
Comments from author:
Merry Christmas
and happy reading :)
I hope you enjoy it!
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to normal" from ChaosLady
Review:
Not bad.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [26 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back to normal" from LMiC
Review:
Good story so far. Love the interactions. Hope your muse stays happy.
Review By [LMiC] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian" from Ember
Review:
I so love this story, always thought Faith works better in harry potter crossovers, please update when you can, this is a great story and I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Ember] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian" from MMWillow
Review:
Very interesting choices about story about how things might have been. I love the way Faith sees things and the bonding between Snape and Faith as well as Faith and George and Luna its a great dynamic!
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Guardian" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wow! That was intense!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian" from BritneyandJacob
Review:
Excellent chapter. I love it. I look forward to more soon.
Review By [BritneyandJacob] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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