Poor Vi, she was all ready to die and then suddenly she was safe and home again. What an emotional rollercoaster! I'm glad it turned out better for her new friends to have Amy around though :) I seem to recall Willow making an amnesia potion earlier in the series. This would seem to be a good tie for it as I think they would all be happier if Xander didn't remember the last 24 hours. Sometimes a good memory wipe is just what you need.
I did notice a few spelling and word swap errors. Maybe you could get someone to read over your work?

If only...but you do your best and a few still sneak through!

Actually I think the memory wipe is a two edged weapon and should only be used as a last resort...unfortuinately Willow doesn't see it that way.

Cheers,
Dave.

Amy must have her own story now!

I did think of this as I posted this story but I don't know when I would find time to write it!

Cheers,
Dave.

Fantastic reading and evil hook to the next story which I'm grinning over right now.

Why, thank-you so much.

Dave.

So... a cliffhanger... niceee; let's see what the girls can do in that world, they have an edge with Amy using that zombie killing spell, altough the after efects on her weren't shown.
So, unto the breach once again, Buffy and Faith go, to kick zombie tale, heell yeah!.
Cool chapters, see ya!!.

I think you'll be surprised by the next story (out on Monday).

Cheers,
Dave.

OK, so Faith, Buffy and Amy versus the zombies? Could be fun...

Considering the 'possibilities' I'm surprised there aren't more stories with Amy in them

Cheers,
Dave.

I got to feel for Xander, but I'm still unsure what I should be feeling. Great update, especially Vi's fun.

Me thinks he did protest too much!

Cheers,
Dave.

Well played Faith! And Willow, for figuring it out so fast.

Well they do what they can!

Cheers,
Dave.

Nothing like tending the needs of beautiful ladies in need of a good bath time... poor, poor Xander =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!.

Yes, it must have been hell for him!

Cheers,
Dave.

This ought to be an interesting explanation. Somehow I suspect Faith will rise to the occasion.

Faith will rise to something I'm sure.

Cheers,
Dave.

Good adlib by Amy. Unless of course this particular PC knows Faith and/or Xander and what they do.

Thank-you.

Dave.

“Take me!” Buffy tore open the front of her blouse exposing her breasts, she wasn’t wearing a bra, “Take me now!”
“NOOOO!” cried Giles as he bumped up against the wall, there was nowhere left to run".

Giles, Giles, Giles, really, must you be so un-gentlemanly, denying Buffy like that? Tsk Tsk Tsk, baad form Rupes, Baad Form.
Man, at least tell her it cant never work out because you're...hmmm, alergic to her hair highlighter, or you can't perform because you need a lot of... coffee, yeah, coffee =D!.
I mean, Giles, is old enough to work out a good set of convincing lies, not to scream like a scared kid =P.

Cool chapter, see ya!.

Ah, but this is Giles we're talking about, father figure and mentor!

Cheers,
Dave.

Yay for Viv!.
She's gonna enjoy a good ol' Zombie Stomping for this... most inconvenient body swapping bussines =D!.

Cool chapter, see ya!.

Cheers, as usual more soon.

Dave.

Ah, I see - she's in Tumbridge Wells.

Oddly I used to live near Tumbridge Wells, ok it was a hell of a long time ago. I don't remember seeing one Zombie...I suppose things might have changed over the years.

Dave.

This has GOT to be the first non-drabble BtVS fanfic to crossover with 'Left 4 Dead 2' - nice touch! :) 'A Dish Served Cold' is off to a very promising start... looking forward to the next chapter.

Wishing you the best of luck with your future literary endeavours,

El :)

I think you're right!

Oddly I don't play computer games, but a friend of mine does and I was watching him play one day and I thought 'this is pretty good'...must be an xover in this!

Cheers annd thanks,

Dave.

OK, well, at least Vi will have some fun while she's away.

Ah! But will it all end in tears?

Dave.