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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from ShyBob
Review:
Vi, the Zombie Slayer--I love it. Nice to see her stepping up, even if she couldn't save all of the others. I couldn't tell if the parallel universe was Resident Evil or 28 Days Later. Either way it was grim ;)
Comments from author:
I think this one was based on the game 'Left Behind'. But as it's been awhile since I wrote this I might be wrong...whatever...

I'm actually writing the sequel to this right now, it'll be posted sometime in the new year, it'll be story 10 in the Grim Up North 2 series.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Gideon
Review:
Poor Vi, she was all ready to die and then suddenly she was safe and home again. What an emotional rollercoaster! I'm glad it turned out better for her new friends to have Amy around though :) I seem to recall Willow making an amnesia potion earlier in the series. This would seem to be a good tie for it as I think they would all be happier if Xander didn't remember the last 24 hours. Sometimes a good memory wipe is just what you need.
I did notice a few spelling and word swap errors. Maybe you could get someone to read over your work?
Comments from author:
If only...but you do your best and a few still sneak through!

Actually I think the memory wipe is a two edged weapon and should only be used as a last resort...unfortuinately Willow doesn't see it that way.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from PATM
Review:
Amy must have her own story now!
Comments from author:
I did think of this as I posted this story but I don't know when I would find time to write it!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [PATM] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from PATM
Review:
Fantastic reading and evil hook to the next story which I'm grinning over right now.
Comments from author:
Why, thank-you so much.

Dave.
Review By [PATM] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
So... a cliffhanger... niceee; let's see what the girls can do in that world, they have an edge with Amy using that zombie killing spell, altough the after efects on her weren't shown.
So, unto the breach once again, Buffy and Faith go, to kick zombie tale, heell yeah!.
Cool chapters, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
I think you'll be surprised by the next story (out on Monday).

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
OK, so Faith, Buffy and Amy versus the zombies? Could be fun...
Comments from author:
Considering the 'possibilities' I'm surprised there aren't more stories with Amy in them

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from eriktheviking
Review:
I got to feel for Xander, but I'm still unsure what I should be feeling. Great update, especially Vi's fun.
Comments from author:
Me thinks he did protest too much!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Well played Faith! And Willow, for figuring it out so fast.
Comments from author:
Well they do what they can!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
Nothing like tending the needs of beautiful ladies in need of a good bath time... poor, poor Xander =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Yes, it must have been hell for him!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
This ought to be an interesting explanation. Somehow I suspect Faith will rise to the occasion.
Comments from author:
Faith will rise to something I'm sure.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from cmdruhura
Review:
Good adlib by Amy. Unless of course this particular PC knows Faith and/or Xander and what they do.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Dave.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Mcspender
Review:
“Take me!” Buffy tore open the front of her blouse exposing her breasts, she wasn’t wearing a bra, “Take me now!”
“NOOOO!” cried Giles as he bumped up against the wall, there was nowhere left to run".

Giles, Giles, Giles, really, must you be so un-gentlemanly, denying Buffy like that? Tsk Tsk Tsk, baad form Rupes, Baad Form.
Man, at least tell her it cant never work out because you're...hmmm, alergic to her hair highlighter, or you can't perform because you need a lot of... coffee, yeah, coffee =D!.
I mean, Giles, is old enough to work out a good set of convincing lies, not to scream like a scared kid =P.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Ah, but this is Giles we're talking about, father figure and mentor!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [17 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter three." from Mcspender
Review:
Yay for Viv!.
She's gonna enjoy a good ol' Zombie Stomping for this... most inconvenient body swapping bussines =D!.

Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Cheers, as usual more soon.

Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter three." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Ah, I see - she's in Tumbridge Wells.
Comments from author:
Oddly I used to live near Tumbridge Wells, ok it was a hell of a long time ago. I don't remember seeing one Zombie...I suppose things might have changed over the years.

Dave.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three." from Elgin
Review:
This has GOT to be the first non-drabble BtVS fanfic to crossover with 'Left 4 Dead 2' - nice touch! :) 'A Dish Served Cold' is off to a very promising start... looking forward to the next chapter.

Wishing you the best of luck with your future literary endeavours,

El :)
Comments from author:
I think you're right!

Oddly I don't play computer games, but a friend of mine does and I was watching him play one day and I thought 'this is pretty good'...must be an xover in this!

Cheers annd thanks,

Dave.
Review By [Elgin] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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