I really liked this first chapter...you usually see that the Buffy characters just get thrown there or something, but the idea of them being enhanced because of the acadamy is a really good idea. I can't wait to read more of this!
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Ok, I wanted to review this story several minutes ago, but since I only just found this site through a FanFiction author, and subsequently didn't even have an account, I was unable to. Your story is only the second one I have read here and I must say, if all of them are this good, I've just found my new source of entertainment for the next year at least. Reviewing meant going through the boring process of creating an account, and since I don't really intend to ever write on this site, I did it for you. Mainly, because I saw that you hadn't updated in several months and this is my shameless attempt at guilting you into giving me a new chapter. From what I've seen so far, your story is well written and with a nice pot going for you. This is the first Buffy/Firefly story I've ever read and I wasn't sure that the combination would really work, but I'm loving it. The only problem that I have is that I ran out of story to read way too soon. I'm not sure if this will spurn you into action and make you update, but I just have to try...
Review By [BSilverbow] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Not Rated
I'm very intrigued, there is no doubt, So I took to my keyboard to give you a shout. Waiting with bated breath for the next installment, Please get it posted before the end of lent.
Review By [sopchoppy] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Good start, it seems interesting. =) But I also think that there is too much Chinese. If you want to put Chinese at least put a translation on the end of the chapter so we can understand what they are saying, ok? =) Good luck with the rest.
Ya, I third, the too much Chinese. While they've been exposed to it a LONG time, they would not think in Chinese. So I doubt they'd curse to themselves in that language.
And just a little thing. The formatting at the end of the chapter made it a little hard to read. Go back to dialog being on a separate line.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated