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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
“So what happens to me now?” Kate asked hesitatingly.

"You become the ME in Boston."

Sorry couldn't pass up the chance. Shame that you aren't finishing this, still enjoyable none the less
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [22 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Netchka
Review:
Just read this again. Cool story. Can't wait for the next chapters to be posted. :-)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [17 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
Review:
I think that Kate is going to end up joining SG1 or one of the other SG teams. And I think that Kate's skills as both an investigator and with the other government agencies she's worked with, would make her a great help with Code Ragnarok. With the trials coming up, a investigator with her skills and background would be welcome.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
Well, now we know what happened. And if it wasn't for the fact that Loki felt that he had done Kate a disservice by cloning her and not doing anything with it till now, shows some honor. But 4 years! Loki, you blew it! Now, its up to Gibbs and O'Neil to straighten this mess out.
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
OK. Options are Doppelganger, Clone, or Resurrection spell gone wrong. Everything POINTS to Kate, but it CAN'T be Kate!
Review By [Harry] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Letomo
Review:
I'm enjoying this story, and do hope it gets continued. Please!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from pagefault
Review:
Good beginning. I suspect Kate will join the SGC. Rejoining the old team would be to conspicuous I think. Interesting question is perhaps how happy / unhappy will Kate be leaving everything she knows ... ?
Comments from author:
You may well be right.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [pagefault] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Off to a good start, here.

I really enjoyed reading PaBurke's take on the "Kate's clone was killed instead of her while she was in Loki's hands" scenario ("Family Ties" - http://www.hugosnebula.com/sgxover/viewstory.php?sid=114&;warning=4), but that story had Kate's relatives Jack and mini!Jack finding her and helping her exact her own vengeance on Ari pretty soon after her clone's death.

The four years this Kate spent on ice (and you neatly worked that into the whole 'death of the Asgard race' plotline) in this story makes for some really intriguing twists, as does the fact that she was reintroduced to her NCIS family before anyone in the SGC knew what had happened.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Blackett
Review:
Great update.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [24 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
If you're interested in anything I have to say, I vote for giving the girl back her life. I can't say it any better so let me quote AllenPitt:



AllenPitt quote:
I'd love to know what cover story they come up with to explain her being alive. Kidnapped by terrorists and replaced by a look-alike, who was then killed? Only now freed from captivity? It'd almost be true...
Or they could just shrug and say they haven't a clue. Big mystery. All sorts of wild theories will come out, none of them remotely close to the truth...



End ALLENPITT QUOTE

Peace

Blue
Comments from author:
I have some plans for Kate, it won't quite be just giving her old life back, but I hope you'll find it interesting,
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jazzibear
Review:
I like this very much. I endorse all the approvals of the other reviewers: they, like you, are clearly people of taste and discrimination.

More, please, as soon as you can and will.

Ta muchly!
Comments from author:
Your welcome

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Gideon
Review:
To Atlantis!
Comments from author:
Maybe.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from bucksavage
Review:
Just read through the other two chapters, nicely done! You are starting to get the character development rolling along there now.
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you liked it.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bucksavage
Review:
just read the first chapter....pretty intense....liking this so far...let's see how far down this rabbit hole goes...
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Actually glad that Loki died; now Kate doesn't have to worry about being nabbed again by him.
Comments from author:
I thought about using him as a villian in this one when I was first starting to plot it out, but decided the story wasn;t going to go that way.

Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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