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Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
nice story so far....thank you for sharing
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from Azrei
Review:
Your story is coming along great. You shouldn't be too hard on yourself. I read this story awhile ago and with your latest story decided to go back through your other work. All I have to say is keep up the excellent story telling.
Review By [Azrei] • Date [27 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from CageFire
Review:
Nice story so far. Although it's been months since an update. Though you do have other stories you might've been working on.
Comments from author:
Actually my house was robbed...so yeah delays are to be expected.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [30 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from PaxDraconix
Review:
I think he needs to review the laws of diminishing returns. It's getting to the point where his secret is doing more harm than good for his and their effectiveness.
Review By [PaxDraconix] • Date [11 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
3.

nice the guest for the party have arrived :)

4.

good meeting with Lady, both are still alive and now he has a talk with Seras ahead of him as well :)

5.

ohhaa what a way to talk to Integra
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
1.

quite the nice start and I am certain to follow this for a while :)

2.

nice scene at Willy's and looks like X has a few ppl interested in him now :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from Netchka
Review:
Good story. Can't wait for the next chapters.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from Studyofchaos
Review:
I'm with your beta on this, decent job on the chapter. Maybe it isn't as smooth as some of the others but the overall story is moving along well and none of the characters where harmed (that shouldn't have been...). Hope to read more of this story soon.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
First thank your muse for cooperating for this chapter! I hope she sees fit to grace you with her presence for this or other stories soon!

Second, good fight scene in the library - well done nicely paced. Good handling of Kendra's introduction and Spike getting Angel.
Good handling of Xander/Cordelia in the basement and Xander handling the bug assassin. Again well paced, just enough breaks to other parts of the story to keep things moving.

Thanks for a great chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from moringstar
Review:
nice update cant wait to see what story you do next.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from Genuka
Review:
Awesome! I wondered if this was going to be kept going.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cahpter 6" from msdarque
Review:
Quite an exciting chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Time to dust it off and start puttin down them keys! Love the story and would really like to see more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
The more you write, the better it gets so keep up the good work! Besides, the ideas at the base of the work are more important, in my opinion, than the grammar, at least in the beginning. Grammar skills can be improved or supplemented by hard work and a good editor. Drop me a line. No notion how fast I will get it back to you but I can definitely clean it up.
Comments from author:
Will talk to you soon, i warn you in advance the next chapter was by far the biggest nightmare i have takled in my career...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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