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GideonReview:
The best explanation for him I have ever seen :)
Comments from author:
Well, it was either Illyria or Glory. Though looks-wise Glory would fit I like the idea of 'Fred' visiting her son's friends, all down-home country, then getting pissed off and letting lose with the violence.
"That is my mother."
"She's a giant smurf!"
"A giant, deadly, god of smurfs."
"..."
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Gideon] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
nice
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Bobboky] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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willowbeeReview:
A little strange, but fitting. Although not so much with his personality in the later books.
Comments from author:
Maybe he's channeling a bit too much Fred? Or Donna (somehow) became his Guide and he's been taking cues from her?
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willowbee] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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WolfWriterReview:
I knew it! Illyria gave birth to the Doctor!
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WolfWriter] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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HiltonKReview:
Excellent little twist :)
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HiltonK] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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TouchoftheWindReview:
I loved it!
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TouchoftheWind] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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angrymonkeyReview:
That was an awsome little story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I read the challenge a while back and it planted a seed that finally grew. Now image Edward doing the time-stop thing and whistling as he cuts throats. *snort*
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angrymonkey] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
