This fic is really interesting--great concept, good solid story. I did see some grammar mistakes of the your/you're variety in chapter 2, though.
I like all the insights into the glee kids' backgrounds, and the explanation for why they all sing and dance being demonic and having wards thrown up all over the place is cool. (Is it Dawn's ex-fiance Sweet?) Blaine trying to disappear at public school is sad. Somehow, it makes the whole thing worse that he doesn't realize why his Dalton friends forgot him.
Also? Your Britt is *adorable*. I love her methods of keeping Blaine there, and I love the Council for always trying to help. Very nice work so far!
Comments from author:
Thanks for pointing out the grammar. I'll reread the chapter and see if I can't find them. Glad you're enjoying the slow build...am still working on the demon that makes them sing, but that's for a later story in this series. Blaine needs hugs in this fic, but thankfully he'll have the glee kids to help him. Glad you're liking Brit. Couldn't resist making her a slayer after that sewers comment! Thank you for the amazing review!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
This is really good though- I can totally see Brit as a Slayer, albeit a slightly ditzy one. I really enjoyed this and I'll be watching for updates! :)
Comments from author:
Blaine needs hugs in this fic. Brit would make an awesome slayer! I'm glad you're enjoying this! Thanks for the review!
Um, random side-note, but are you having trouble with livejournal, or is it just me?
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Commenting notifications has been messed up for awhile, but seems to finally be getting back tomorrow. Um, it was fine for me yesterday, but I wasn't on for long. The day before that though everything was moving slow.
Very good, I love Brittney she's one of my favorite characters on glee right after Artie and even though I love Artie and Britt together (please don't hate on Artie) Santana and Brittney work well. Just hook Artie up with someone good OK.
Comments from author:
I like Artie, I wouldn't hate on him. That said, right now it's hinting Santana/Brit, but I haven't quite decided where those two are going yet, so it's quite possile she could end up with Artie down the line. This fic focuses more on Blaine and his struggle while lining up the other chars for future stories. Thanks for the review!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]